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Array ( [sid] => 53550 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No Comfort In My Own Body [time] => 2004-06-24 17:13:18 [hometext] => This is how I felt yesterday....please comment if you want [bodytext] => Weakness invading the body
I can feel my blood flowing through it
I don't like this feeling
I just sit still
I hate moving
My legs are weak
I want to be alone
But at the same time I don't
So uncomfortable in my own body
These feelings are making me ill
I sit and stare
Rock myself for comfort
Too weak and tired
I want to be myself again
And regain the comfort I once had in my body [comments] => 5 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 61 [informant] => pyrofungus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

No Comfort In My Own Body

Contributed by pyrofungus on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 05:13:18 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Weakness invading the body
I can feel my blood flowing through it
I don't like this feeling
I just sit still
I hate moving
My legs are weak
I want to be alone
But at the same time I don't
So uncomfortable in my own body
These feelings are making me ill
I sit and stare
Rock myself for comfort
Too weak and tired
I want to be myself again
And regain the comfort I once had in my body

Copyright © pyrofungus ... [ 2004-06-24 17:13:18]
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Re: No Comfort In My Own Body (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie-Kie on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 05:49:04 PM AEST
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Wow.....I know exactly how u feel.......I go thru that a lot........I've been trying 2 write about the feeling but couldn't explain it but u sure found a way............this poem's great & pplz can relate what more can u ask 4 in a poem???
Great Job

~Kiela~

Re: No Comfort In My Own Body (User Rating: 1 )
by creed on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 06:44:45 PM AEST
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I can relate to this poem alot. I've had that feeling alot of times. I still feel that way every now and then. I like this one!

Re: No Comfort In My Own Body (User Rating: 1 )
by rugby_player on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 11:53:07 PM AEST
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from time to time i feel like this so i know exactly what your going through or were going through great job expressing your self

Re: No Comfort In My Own Body (User Rating: 1 )
by DeathByLove on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 07:07:10 PM AEST
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Wow I love this! It's such an inspiring poem! God your good!

Re: No Comfort In My Own Body (User Rating: 1 )
by RobertKilpatrick on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 02:26:31 AM AEST
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i know exactly how you feel: That feeling of no control over the body... Good expressions...

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