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Array ( [sid] => 53568 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dark Rain [time] => 2004-06-24 19:24:53 [hometext] => The price i pay for life [bodytext] => Silence fills the darkened street
Papers lie till wind they meet
An amber sky takes its shape
Casting down its red cape

Silence settles on the ground
The sweet wind carries not a sound
Black rain falls thick and fast
Like waste that god himself has cast

Alone again I take it in
Let it hit me like newfound sin
Naked like I’m just borne
The rain washes my skin so torn

Fresh blood fell
From my skin so pail
Blue eyes shine
No longer divine

Endless sin
No light shines in…….
[comments] => 8 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Shadow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Dark Rain

Contributed by Shadow on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:24:53 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Silence fills the darkened street
Papers lie till wind they meet
An amber sky takes its shape
Casting down its red cape

Silence settles on the ground
The sweet wind carries not a sound
Black rain falls thick and fast
Like waste that god himself has cast

Alone again I take it in
Let it hit me like newfound sin
Naked like I’m just borne
The rain washes my skin so torn

Fresh blood fell
From my skin so pail
Blue eyes shine
No longer divine

Endless sin
No light shines in…….

Copyright Â© Shadow ... [ 2004-06-24 19:24:53]
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Re: Dark Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:33:14 PM AEST
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very eerie and beautiful, good work*

Re: Dark Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 08:26:14 PM AEST
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Well done....I like the flow on this one.

Re: Dark Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 09:05:58 PM AEST
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greatly written dark poem Shadow........*claps hands*

takecare

piixe xx

Re: Dark Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 09:10:26 PM AEST
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great images and so well written, a sad though beautiful poem:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Dark Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by imaginary on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 10:00:41 PM AEST
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It painted me a picture, I could see everything you described. So pretty, i hope to read more of your things in the future.

Re: Dark Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 10:30:34 PM AEST
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excellent write.

Re: Dark Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie-Kie on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:00:48 PM AEST
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It's an amazing write...sad but once again I can relate...I absolutly admire your work...
Love Always,
~Kie-Kie~ XOXO

Re: Dark Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by veenu on Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 02:02:30 AM AEST
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thats really best of u.........
i have not read it before if i would i will comment on its great
thanx for sharing such a pleasure

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