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Array ( [sid] => 5366 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => heart box [time] => 2002-10-21 10:45:00 [hometext] => i think i am desensitized to love..what am i worth? i always question... [bodytext] =>
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i wanna know who i am
what i deserve
my heart is a box with a rusted lock
it will be impossible to find the key

tell me who i am
make me be in love with you
and write mushy poems
and talk about the depth of your eyes
the scent of your hair
and how wonderful you kiss

i used to love love
i felt like i was flying when you would talk to me
but now...
now you see me and i could care less
now i kiss u and i want to spit it out
you touch me and i don't feel any fieworks

and people write about how wondeful everything is and i think

that maybe i should give up on love if it isn't fun,
until i find it

my true love...
it sounds so right, but is it wrong?

remember..oct 2002 [comments] => 5 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 33 [informant] => dantoad [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

heart box

Contributed by dantoad on Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 10:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

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i wanna know who i am
what i deserve
my heart is a box with a rusted lock
it will be impossible to find the key

tell me who i am
make me be in love with you
and write mushy poems
and talk about the depth of your eyes
the scent of your hair
and how wonderful you kiss

i used to love love
i felt like i was flying when you would talk to me
but now...
now you see me and i could care less
now i kiss u and i want to spit it out
you touch me and i don't feel any fieworks

and people write about how wondeful everything is and i think

that maybe i should give up on love if it isn't fun,
until i find it

my true love...
it sounds so right, but is it wrong?

remember..oct 2002

Copyright © dantoad ... [ 2002-10-21 10:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: heart box (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 11:38:33 AM AEST
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a great poem...your questions well be anserwed

Re: heart box (User Rating: 1 )
by savannah on Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 11:41:25 AM AEST
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I identified with this poem so well! I really loved it!

Re: heart box (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 11:49:51 AM AEST
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I can relate to this. I'm always questioning and second-guessing myself. I've always wanted that wonderful, amazing, "perfect" love. Don't give up on love, but don't let it be everything you think about. When you find it, you'll know that it's right, and meant to be.

~ MoonlitAngel

Re: heart box (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 01:45:31 PM AEST
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Ya know...an old rusty lock needs but only a good kick to release :)

Re: heart box (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 02:02:49 PM AEST
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Great poem....interesting questions.... hope you find your answers.. I used to ask the same..
Jenni

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