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Array ( [sid] => 53779 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Leaving Home [time] => 2004-06-26 12:26:48 [hometext] => Within the next few months me & Mark will be getting a place together....... [bodytext] => Soon I will be leaving home,
Me & Mark are getting a place on our own,
I feel quite upset to be leaving Mum & Dad,
Although in the same breath I am glad.

I won稚 be moving too far away,
So I値l be able to pop in from day to day,
For a brew & a good old chat,
It値l be strange walking back over the mat.

Mum said she値l feel very lonely,
That I have made our house feel homely,
With my presence & my noise,
Shared all the laughter, tears & joys.

But I know that I知 all grown up,
No longer am I a yapping, little pup,
I must spread my wings free as a bird,
There痴 much more of life I知 yet to learn.

I値l be waving a reluctant goodbye,
To the people who kept me high & dry,
For all these years they cared for me,
Now I must drop out from that tree.

I don稚 want to I知 quite scared,
But a life of our own I want to share,
I hope that Mark truly understands,
That I値l still need someone to hold my hand.
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 48 [informant] => pixie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Leaving Home

Contributed by pixie on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 12:26:48 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Soon I will be leaving home,
Me & Mark are getting a place on our own,
I feel quite upset to be leaving Mum & Dad,
Although in the same breath I am glad.

I won稚 be moving too far away,
So I値l be able to pop in from day to day,
For a brew & a good old chat,
It値l be strange walking back over the mat.

Mum said she値l feel very lonely,
That I have made our house feel homely,
With my presence & my noise,
Shared all the laughter, tears & joys.

But I know that I知 all grown up,
No longer am I a yapping, little pup,
I must spread my wings free as a bird,
There痴 much more of life I知 yet to learn.

I値l be waving a reluctant goodbye,
To the people who kept me high & dry,
For all these years they cared for me,
Now I must drop out from that tree.

I don稚 want to I知 quite scared,
But a life of our own I want to share,
I hope that Mark truly understands,
That I値l still need someone to hold my hand.




Copyright ツゥ pixie ... [ 2004-06-26 12:26:48]
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Re: Leaving Home (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 01:32:14 PM AEST
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Scary, yes! Exciting, yes! Look at the new life awaiting you with Marc and all the new parts of life to love and explore and make your own. Branching out on your own is an adventure that will prove rewarding and make you much stronger.

Love,
Rita


Re: Leaving Home (User Rating: 1 )
by KSUHO11 on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 02:12:46 PM AEST
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I'm gonna now the feeling soon as well, its crazy but its a good thing to do, to be on your own, it'll be all gravy, good luck love, catch ya on the flip side.


Re: Leaving Home (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 02:23:24 PM AEST
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Best of everything, my little pixie friend... to you and Mark... Hope your life will be everything you dream of... Just don't give up on Mom and Dad..ok...
Hugs
Jenni


Re: Leaving Home (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 10:18:22 PM AEST
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Oh I know the feeling. I'll be leaving on a plane to a foreign country to continue my studies and that scares me more than anything. Although the door to freedom is finally wide open now, there are some jumpy nerves as well.
I hope you and Mark have a great life together.


Re: Leaving Home (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 09:41:23 AM AEST
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can definitely relate to how you're feeling, good luck with everything... beautiful poem :)*




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