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Array ( [sid] => 53805 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => dave [time] => 2004-06-26 15:26:23 [hometext] => not my style of writing at all..but i had an assignemnt to do an alphabet poem.. and the topic i chose was my father.. or lack there of [bodytext] => anger is the only thing you ever show to me, not loving and caring

because of you my life is miserable and full of pain

cori has a real father, something ill never have

dads are suppose to love both of their children equally, your not a dad

everyone sees how depressed i am, why cant you

for all those times you hurt me, ive decided to exclude you from my life

go away and let my mom, rach, and i be a family, a happy family

how can you cause so much pain to your own flesh and blood ill never know

ignorance makes up so much of your personality

jail sentences should be given to you for all the things youve done to me

kids these days need a family with two loving parents, something youll never be

loved is a feeling you never have shown to your family

my mom is getting stuck in the middle of our problems and its tearing her apart

nobody will ever be able to understand the psychotic thoughts that run throught your head

obvioulsy you're not ready to have children yet, give it up

people dont want to live with someone who rips their heart to pieces

quit putting the blame on me, take responsibility for your own actions

show somebody you really do care, surprise us all, stun us

truth and honesty dont mean anything in your book of values

understanding others isnt something you do very well, you judge too harshly and care too little

very few people in this world know the real violent you, i wish i didnt

xtra love has always been shown to my sister, ill never know why

you need to admit to all the physical and emotional pain you've put me through

zero times in my life have i ever felt you were a loving farhter, or a father at all





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dave

Contributed by deadbloodyrose on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 03:26:23 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



anger is the only thing you ever show to me, not loving and caring

because of you my life is miserable and full of pain

cori has a real father, something ill never have

dads are suppose to love both of their children equally, your not a dad

everyone sees how depressed i am, why cant you

for all those times you hurt me, ive decided to exclude you from my life

go away and let my mom, rach, and i be a family, a happy family

how can you cause so much pain to your own flesh and blood ill never know

ignorance makes up so much of your personality

jail sentences should be given to you for all the things youve done to me

kids these days need a family with two loving parents, something youll never be

loved is a feeling you never have shown to your family

my mom is getting stuck in the middle of our problems and its tearing her apart

nobody will ever be able to understand the psychotic thoughts that run throught your head

obvioulsy you're not ready to have children yet, give it up

people dont want to live with someone who rips their heart to pieces

quit putting the blame on me, take responsibility for your own actions

show somebody you really do care, surprise us all, stun us

truth and honesty dont mean anything in your book of values

understanding others isnt something you do very well, you judge too harshly and care too little

very few people in this world know the real violent you, i wish i didnt

xtra love has always been shown to my sister, ill never know why

you need to admit to all the physical and emotional pain you've put me through

zero times in my life have i ever felt you were a loving farhter, or a father at all









Copyright © deadbloodyrose ... [ 2004-06-26 15:26:23]
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Re: dave (User Rating: 1 )
by xXxFaygoFetishxXx on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 01:30:05 AM AEST
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Even if its not your style of writing it's still a good poem.
And even though your dad is a dick most of the time and doesn't show you as much love as you deserve.
There are others like Jeff, your friends, and me =D who do love you.
::Elizabeth::




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