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Array ( [sid] => 53812 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Someday [time] => 2004-06-26 16:01:19 [hometext] => i wrote this becuz my friend mike inspired me. it sums up alot of my feelings. [bodytext] => Someday I’ll know….
Just who I’m supposed to be,
And who I’m supposed to love,
And what I’m supposed to see,
But for now….I’m here.
My heart…….gets broken,
And I shed my tears.
My world gets shaken
And I have my fears,
But…they’re here too.
The ones who care.
The ones who are loving
And willing to share.
They’re the ones who keep me sane
Who fill the losses,
And dull the pain.
I know God must send them here
To be angels on earth.
He knows what’s best
No matter how I think it should work.
So thank you to those
Who have seen me through,
Who have heard my thoughts,
Ignored my flaws,
And loved me true.
Someday…we’ll all know,
But until then….
I’m here.
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Someday

Contributed by SuperGirl on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 04:01:19 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Someday I’ll know….
Just who I’m supposed to be,
And who I’m supposed to love,
And what I’m supposed to see,
But for now….I’m here.
My heart…….gets broken,
And I shed my tears.
My world gets shaken
And I have my fears,
But…they’re here too.
The ones who care.
The ones who are loving
And willing to share.
They’re the ones who keep me sane
Who fill the losses,
And dull the pain.
I know God must send them here
To be angels on earth.
He knows what’s best
No matter how I think it should work.
So thank you to those
Who have seen me through,
Who have heard my thoughts,
Ignored my flaws,
And loved me true.
Someday…we’ll all know,
But until then….
I’m here.

Copyright Â© SuperGirl ... [ 2004-06-26 16:01:19]
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Re: Someday (User Rating: 1 )
by mdmorash on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 04:03:04 PM AEST
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Very cool. Good structure and rhyme. Nice...

Re: Someday (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 05:52:13 PM AEST
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This is great.

"Someday I’ll know….
Just who I’m supposed to be,
And who I’m supposed to love,
And what I’m supposed to see,
But for now….I’m here"

I love those first five lines. This passes through my mind every single day.
We are glad you are here.
Good write, nice rhyme.
*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: Someday (User Rating: 1 )
by SuperGirl on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 06:51:30 PM AEST
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i just wanted to say thank you to those who commented. i only wrote this poem becuz a friend wanted me to. just to prove that i could write a poem. you're comments gave me a self-esteem boost!! thanks!!

Re: Someday (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 09:34:37 PM AEST
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come on people tell her to write more. convince her that she has talent.

anyhow good job and its amazing as a frist poem. keep up the good work.

misfit

Re: Someday (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 10:23:14 PM AEST
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Very Cute

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