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You'd weave daisies through my hair
I was sung lullabies
and love we would always share

Once upon a time
You would make it all okay
and I didnt hide behind my smile
cuz you kissed my tears away

Once upon a time
It didn't hurt to love you
The only escape I did
was what I knew how to do

Once upon a time
I used to dream of you
But I couldn't wait to awaken
to what I was use to

Once upon a time
I would face my fears
Lost in sleep
Drowning in blood and tears

Once upon a time
to either sleep or cry
I was lost in sleep
To destroy myself and die

Once upon a time
I used to believe I could warn my star
Or atleast move the glaciers
But now Im not alive, and way to far

Once upon a time...

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Once upon a time

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 11:59:27 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Once upon a time
You'd weave daisies through my hair
I was sung lullabies
and love we would always share

Once upon a time
You would make it all okay
and I didnt hide behind my smile
cuz you kissed my tears away

Once upon a time
It didn't hurt to love you
The only escape I did
was what I knew how to do

Once upon a time
I used to dream of you
But I couldn't wait to awaken
to what I was use to

Once upon a time
I would face my fears
Lost in sleep
Drowning in blood and tears

Once upon a time
to either sleep or cry
I was lost in sleep
To destroy myself and die

Once upon a time
I used to believe I could warn my star
Or atleast move the glaciers
But now Im not alive, and way to far

Once upon a time...

Copyright © Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-06-26 23:59:27]
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Re: Once upon a time (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:04:25 AM AEST
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wonderful poem.. u did a really nice job it was beautifully written.. love is pain.. AMI JO

Re: Once upon a time (User Rating: 1 )
by TheLastStringCut on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:10:42 AM AEST
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That was pretty beautiful, however it was also sad. I seem to get a lotta sadness coming from your poems. Are you okay? It was a nice poem, and I liked it. Good Job.

-Jeff

Re: Once upon a time (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:20:30 AM AEST
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i loved this poem. a person can make the biggest difference to someone and not even know it. it also shows the cycle of things in a way. excellent write dani.

Re: Once upon a time (User Rating: 1 )
by SpreadYourWings on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:42:37 AM AEST
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That was a very beautiful poem. Best of luck to you in the future. Hold On

Re: Once upon a time (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 11:07:21 AM AEST
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this is very deep and emotional. made me feel very sad *hugs you*

pixie xx

Re: Once upon a time (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 03:26:31 PM AEST
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I know what its like to give your best and still feel inadequate. another good poem. as always loved reading. A++++

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