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Array ( [sid] => 53865 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Car Accident [time] => 2004-06-27 02:00:48 [hometext] => Please respond good or bad I need input!!!!!!! lol [bodytext] => You want me to wear my pain on my sleeve so that you can see it like a car accident while you are safely driving by.

You show your curiosity at my expense, never stopping to think how much closer you bring me to my own agony.

Ah But it’s just your concern, your gentle prodding that you give with so much love and compassion to know the inner depths of My soul or My mistakes.

You think that your reminders of what I already know will make a difference or an amends.

You want to know how could I, with your (perceived) good intentions make the choices I’ve made?

You look at me from the outside convinced of what you think is on the inside.

Your search wont end with me if you don’t in your own heart know what it means to sacrifice,

To wear your pain everyday right out in front, where everyone can see.

To stand in the light of the sun, with your chest open and not be scarred by the burn.

Don’t pity me
Stop the car
Unbuckle your seatbelt
And get out.
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Car Accident

Contributed by nexxa on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 02:00:48 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



You want me to wear my pain on my sleeve so that you can see it like a car accident while you are safely driving by.

You show your curiosity at my expense, never stopping to think how much closer you bring me to my own agony.

Ah But it’s just your concern, your gentle prodding that you give with so much love and compassion to know the inner depths of My soul or My mistakes.

You think that your reminders of what I already know will make a difference or an amends.

You want to know how could I, with your (perceived) good intentions make the choices I’ve made?

You look at me from the outside convinced of what you think is on the inside.

Your search wont end with me if you don’t in your own heart know what it means to sacrifice,

To wear your pain everyday right out in front, where everyone can see.

To stand in the light of the sun, with your chest open and not be scarred by the burn.

Don’t pity me
Stop the car
Unbuckle your seatbelt
And get out.




Copyright © nexxa ... [ 2004-06-27 02:00:48]
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Re: Car Accident (User Rating: 1 )
by angelav on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 02:33:07 AM AEST
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Stand up for yourself. Only you can heal yourself, and know what's best for you. Keep it going. hugs-angelav


Re: Car Accident (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 02:46:45 AM AEST
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Very interesting work here. Nice change of pace.
huggs, luv,
emy


Re: Car Accident (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 09:55:13 AM AEST
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many painful feelings. stick up for your-self move. be better than this, don't let anyone put you down.




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