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Array ( [sid] => 53939 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i Pray [time] => 2004-06-27 21:23:28 [hometext] => its not really a poem it started out to be but it just turned into just me writting down my thoughts,Its about a friend that killed himself and im askingmy self why. [bodytext] => I sit here with my head down is shame,
I cant belive i whent back to the blade,
I thought this part of my life was done,
I thought i have moved on,
My scar's were fading, and i know in my hart what, i have to do,
I have to forget,forget you,
It's hard going throu life knowing your not there,
Knowing i'll never get back what we shared,
Why did you have to go?
Why did you have to leave like that?
Did I not pay Enough Attention?
Should I not of made you wait so long?
Whould you of carried on?
I dont see how you leaving me solved anything
Do you know i miss you,and that i cry for you at night? But I know you'r up there and i know you love me to,
I just wanna know why you did it.
I guess its the quetion i will never get awnserd,
I miss you so much it hurts, your mother has not stept foot in your room since that morning,
when you were found,
what a horrible sit to see, I rember getting the call,
Think what a sick joke,Why whould someone ever play a joke like this?
i rember looking at you befor they put you in the ground,
But i want you to know im thinking of you thou you might not be around, i think think and i stil pray we'll be together someday




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i Pray

Contributed by XxLos3r4Lif3xX on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 09:23:28 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I sit here with my head down is shame,
I cant belive i whent back to the blade,
I thought this part of my life was done,
I thought i have moved on,
My scar's were fading, and i know in my hart what, i have to do,
I have to forget,forget you,
It's hard going throu life knowing your not there,
Knowing i'll never get back what we shared,
Why did you have to go?
Why did you have to leave like that?
Did I not pay Enough Attention?
Should I not of made you wait so long?
Whould you of carried on?
I dont see how you leaving me solved anything
Do you know i miss you,and that i cry for you at night? But I know you'r up there and i know you love me to,
I just wanna know why you did it.
I guess its the quetion i will never get awnserd,
I miss you so much it hurts, your mother has not stept foot in your room since that morning,
when you were found,
what a horrible sit to see, I rember getting the call,
Think what a sick joke,Why whould someone ever play a joke like this?
i rember looking at you befor they put you in the ground,
But i want you to know im thinking of you thou you might not be around, i think think and i stil pray we'll be together someday








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Re: i Pray (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 05:36:21 AM AEST
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OMG!! This is heart-breaking....Must have been hard to write this.... I am so sorry.....
Except for some spelling errors this is well said...
Jenni




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