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Array ( [sid] => 54136 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Murky Waters Of The Mind [time] => 2004-06-29 12:42:49 [hometext] => This is a poem about writers block, I hgave got a few things on my mind & can't seem to put together my poems like I was doing...(although I did manage to write this lol) [bodytext] => Beginning to suffer from writers block,
All I can hear is the ticking clock,
Echoing inside my empty mind,
To inspiration I’m becoming blind.

I can’t keep hold of my thoughts,
My once calm mind is now feeling fraught,
A blank mist resides in my head
I have lost my writing thread.

I need to find some new ideas,
But every thing at the moment is unclear,
My brain is very tired & feels weary,
I try to look but my sights is bleary.

I hate these damn poetry droughts,
I am determined to seek new writings out,
The harder I try the more I struggle,
How do I get out if this murky puddle?

Poetry is now a big part of me,
I need to write, I need to feel free,
Without my words who am I?
I wish my sea of thought hadn’t run dry.

A poet that has run out of words,
Is like a singer that can not be heard,
Writing makes me feel whole again.
Helps me to deal with my hurt & pain.






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Murky Waters Of The Mind

Contributed by pixie on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:42:49 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Beginning to suffer from writers block,
All I can hear is the ticking clock,
Echoing inside my empty mind,
To inspiration I’m becoming blind.

I can’t keep hold of my thoughts,
My once calm mind is now feeling fraught,
A blank mist resides in my head
I have lost my writing thread.

I need to find some new ideas,
But every thing at the moment is unclear,
My brain is very tired & feels weary,
I try to look but my sights is bleary.

I hate these damn poetry droughts,
I am determined to seek new writings out,
The harder I try the more I struggle,
How do I get out if this murky puddle?

Poetry is now a big part of me,
I need to write, I need to feel free,
Without my words who am I?
I wish my sea of thought hadn’t run dry.

A poet that has run out of words,
Is like a singer that can not be heard,
Writing makes me feel whole again.
Helps me to deal with my hurt & pain.










Copyright © pixie ... [ 2004-06-29 12:42:49]
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Re: Murky Waters Of The Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by allymp on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 01:23:52 PM AEST
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This is a great poem. You have a lot of talent. Keep writing


Re: Murky Waters Of The Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 08:49:32 PM AEST
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your sea hasnt run dry pixie, this is, as are all of your poems, beautifully written and lovely in style and flow:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Murky Waters Of The Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Coaster on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 11:03:05 AM AEST
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Wow very good write. I love the comparisons. My favorite lines are "A poet that has run out of words/ Is like a singer that can not be heard". You are very talented and I'm looking forward to reading more of your writes. Thank you.
Ryan


Re: Murky Waters Of The Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 10:19:34 PM AEST
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Great poem krissy. You did great with all the words. :)




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