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[aid] => mick
[title] => milepost 91
[time] => 2004-07-01 02:07:23
[hometext] => cross my heart, and hope to die, i once lived a happy life, yet now it makes me cry,
[bodytext] =>
___________________
i wonder does he wonder
why i do the things i do
as he watches me from the heavens
all this unending love i send
does he laugh at me?
when i do something less than bright?
is that him, making ripples in the starlight?
what is it now amuses him?
maybe me getting older
whilst he is forever young
this is some of my life's tale
about why i wept and wailed
denial is a cruel thing
that death brings
i want to turn back time
to when he was mine
when i was loved and lived the fairytale
and it was oh, so real
knowing me as he does and what im after
does he burst into hysterical laughter?
does he smile up there, and say;
her well laid plans went awry, hehe
humpf, i bet he does
my only advice to you
is always be true
say what you mean
and mean what you say
do not wait to do it
some other day
my love and i were lucky
we were not shy to say
that in each other's eyes
the flowers bloomed each day
winters were magic
and time together sweet
we had a song in our souls
and kept in tune with our beat
each heart carried a thud
when the last breath was taken
for now we are lost to one another
our love forsaken
new jersey took him away
on that rainy foggy night
my life, too, was done
when he died by
milepost 91
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[comments] => 19
[counter] => 309
[topic] => 39
[informant] => ladyfawn
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
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[score] => 100
[ratings] => 20
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[associated] =>
[topicname] => Grief
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milepost 91
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 02:07:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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___________________
i wonder does he wonder
why i do the things i do
as he watches me from the heavens
all this unending love i send
does he laugh at me?
when i do something less than bright?
is that him, making ripples in the starlight?
what is it now amuses him?
maybe me getting older
whilst he is forever young
this is some of my life's tale
about why i wept and wailed
denial is a cruel thing
that death brings
i want to turn back time
to when he was mine
when i was loved and lived the fairytale
and it was oh, so real
knowing me as he does and what im after
does he burst into hysterical laughter?
does he smile up there, and say;
her well laid plans went awry, hehe
humpf, i bet he does
my only advice to you
is always be true
say what you mean
and mean what you say
do not wait to do it
some other day
my love and i were lucky
we were not shy to say
that in each other's eyes
the flowers bloomed each day
winters were magic
and time together sweet
we had a song in our souls
and kept in tune with our beat
each heart carried a thud
when the last breath was taken
for now we are lost to one another
our love forsaken
new jersey took him away
on that rainy foggy night
my life, too, was done
when he died by
milepost 91
§* *§
*|*
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Re: milepost 91
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 02:13:18 AM AEST
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Oh nessa,
this is beautifull but sad. U r lucky to have had such luv if only for a moment.
I'm sure he sees and hears everything.
He's your own personal angel and his luv for u will never die as yours for him want.
U r such a beautifull, wonderful soul and no one can deny that.
We don't understand why these things happen but real luv never, eveer dies.
God bless u my dear friend.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: milepost 91
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by venkat on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 02:31:46 AM AEST
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You have created ripples not only in starlight but also in the lake of sorrow..and turned the time flow back to that rainy foggy night when the tragic incident occured..its a timeless
cry of your heart's grief and a precious work..
hugs with a heavy heart dear lady.. sincerely.
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Re: milepost 91
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by spooky on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 03:55:08 AM AEST
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| I do know the feeling of loseing a loved one,,she would have been my wife,,but a drunken driver took her away,,,beautifully written,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: milepost 91
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by pixie on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 05:34:50 AM AEST
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very sad..... brought tears to my eyes *hugs*
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: milepost 91
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by thumper on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:07:23 AM AEST
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This was so heart rendingly beautiful. My heart goes out to you. You have your sweet memories to keep you until you are together again. And I'm sure he's not laughing at you, instead he's watching out for you, and sending love from above. Peace, and hugs to you.
Thumps ; 0 ) |
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Re: milepost 91
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 09:21:14 AM AEST
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such a sad write, but this is what makes you the poet you are. Your ability to produce work of this level straight from the heart, well done.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: milepost 91
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 09:46:12 AM AEST
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Your heart and soul shared for all of us to see the beauty of the love you had. You are a remarkable woman, Nessa.
Love n hugs,
Rita |
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Re: milepost 91
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 10:01:10 PM AEST
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| Nessa, your emotions always manages to touch each and every one of us. The words you have says so much about your heart. You are lucky I should say to be able to enjoy such beautiful love. Great write, truly an unforgettable one. |
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Re: milepost 91
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by hooray_its_jen on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 02:24:17 PM AEST
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Wow, Nessa, this is a beautiful write. It's sad to hear things like that. Wonderful poem!
Blessings
Love, Jenna |
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Re: milepost 91
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 01:31:50 PM AEST
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I am sure he is watching you helping you clear away the clouds of pain.
Holding you close and comforting you in your sorrow.
Such a beautiful poem you can see the love you shared was wonderful it shines through your words
Take care lots of love
Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: milepost 91
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by Merry on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 09:19:32 AM AEST
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you are stronger than you know and you can be sure he is watching you - perhaps guiding you even though you do not know it. He knows the words of your heart and hears you -
merry |
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Re: milepost 91
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by yellow_sundragon on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:44:46 PM AEST
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Mom, it's beautiful... it is it is....
*sighs and huggles her mom tightly*
Jaime |
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Re: milepost 91
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 05:25:57 PM AEST
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(((((((((((NESS))))))))))
Love you, grrlfriend....
touching and beautifully done..... *tears*
Hugs and woofies....
Jenni |
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Re: milepost 91
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by TheVoice on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 09:37:07 PM AEST
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your life has not ended, just changed. he is still there to help guide you if you listen. peace be with you my dear friend.
hugs,
the voice
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Re: milepost 91
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by arden on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 01:50:56 PM AEST
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so sad nessa. it holds such great saddness and loss. very beautiful in its own way.
loved it.
great piece
Arden |
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Re: milepost 91
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by tifrob on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 10:41:27 PM AEST
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Nessa,
What is there left to say. Everyone else has covered everything. You're a very lucky lady. Your friends here at YPDC love you very much + it is obvious. You were also truely loved by man + treated like a precious - precious lady. I envy you. I also hope to be counted among your friends. I also believe he is guiding + loving you. We all have our angels. I'm glad you have yours + yes he is smiling in a big way...
Love,
J~ |
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Re: milepost 91
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 09:41:39 PM AEST
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| Nessa, his heart and soul live on in your writes my friend. Very well written. hugs *S* Cynthia |
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Re: milepost 91
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by Archie on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 10:13:49 PM AEST
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| This is very sad but it is well written. It has all the positive attributes that i have come to expect from reading your poems. This one has something else in ti too; the voice of a loved one speaking to comfort one still living. |
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Re: milepost 91
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by colinb on
Tuesday, 29th July 2014 @ 02:34:46 AM AEST
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| beautifully written sad |
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