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Lost Soul
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
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Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 01:54:49 PM in AEST
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My soul is lost
Yours is found
Someday I will find it
On bits of shattered ground
Undoubtedly my soul is
Lost somewhere on broken ground
Inside I feel empty
Without my soul to guide me
Love can never come back
Until I find my soul
Open heart or not
Still it wil flee
So I will try to find what I have lost
My soul is lost
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
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2004-07-01 13:54:49]
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Re: Lost Soul
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by pixie on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 02:02:55 PM AEST
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great poem, I hope that one day you can find your soul...
pixie xx |
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Re: Lost Soul
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by neglected1 on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 03:30:11 PM AEST
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I think its there .. you just need to open up.. gather yourself ..
great write n' luck to you
~neglected1~ |
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Re: Lost Soul
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 07:32:48 PM AEST
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What is lost May yet still be found,
Look deep within your heart,
This was an awesome poem, I know what it is like to be lost, and some times wonder if I am still lost in the darkening void of sorrow,you have great talent, and for poem that you say is old, it is very gripping.
Keep it up and take care. |
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Re: Lost Soul
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 01:14:57 PM AEST
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Fantastic poem once again Kie. I love how you wrote this one.
All your poems I really enjoy reading
Seems you are a lot happier these days here is hoping your happiness continues to flourish
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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