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[aid] => mick
[title] => Spinning round
[time] => 2004-07-01 15:10:36
[hometext] => This is the first thing i have wrote in along time... I think i lost my touch but oh well ... please comment
[bodytext] => Lost in a maze of paranoia Simple day gone bad Everything sever and folded Tearing and the seam Could you stay long enough for me to say goodbye If you could see the real me breathe I will be tattered and tired Then blissfully walk to the edge Spinning round Round spinning round, round i follow down What's left...Sanctity I'm used to you tripping over me I want to come apart or dig myself a little hole inside your heart But i taste what i cant have It's from you I'm on the outside...and i cant mend Sqeeze my eyes shut so i cant see The pain in you, this pain in me Maybe tomorrow wont be so bad I just live for my tomorrow It wasn't easy with the tears that rolled Rolled down, down Round spinning round, round i follow down Crumbling to my knees I cant feel this another night Half unconscious to escape my paranoia You're just too busy with yourself Never stopped and asked..What you could do Retreat to a place within me Bottled inside to torment me Torture me like it used to So many words i should have said Trapped with these memories so distant Round spinning round, round i follow down You, now i see Keeping everything inside I've tasted that cold steel of my life Crashing down before me You're curses making me feel not human But i taste the same cold steel from you Locked here inside my head Remembering everything you have said I'll remain within me, you can play your own game More perfect.. Its your time to spin [comments] => 3 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 43 [informant] => neglected1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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