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Array ( [sid] => 54395 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Why oh the why [time] => 2004-07-01 15:56:48 [hometext] => i aplogise for any offense caused by this poem. it is just my feelings. [bodytext] => So much I wish to say,
Yet so little I manage to get further than my lips.
I don’t know what to think.
Should I even bother to say my words?
After all makes no sense to you.

I long for the tenderness of a kiss,
With the amount of love I used to have,
Just so passionless, oh why do I long for more passion.
Why can I not be content with what I’ve got.
Its not as if its not enough for most.
Yet just not enough for me.

Love no longer feels as if it is real,
Too long has it been since I felt it from anyone.
Yet so much love I still have to give, yet who can take that much.
I feel like I’ve already come to my end at an early age.
If there was a god why am I put through pain,
So much hurt and heartache, oh why.
Always taking loved ones

Feeling so alone, myself for true company.
Warped illusions of the oh so perfect hell hole that is life.
Dragged from one problem to the next, you’re meant to be my god!
Why do you constantly do this pain causing to me, you ****!
There’s only so much one person can take before breaking.
Well I guess finally I have reached it, happy now?
Shocked at how long it took you to get me here.

I always push my loved ones away.
It’s the safest thing I can do for them if they love me.
They need to understand I’m not completely together myself.
I deal with each day as it comes, it’s the only way I can.
I’m not strong; I can’t take that much anymore.
I’m an emotional wreckage of feeling.

No one truly understands my mind.
I need to break this circle before it breaks me.
I need to free my self from this trap that’s called life.
Yet there is no easy way to get this through
I do not want to be dead though.
Is this surprising?

I’m just a warped illusion,
Something to come from a dream
An image from a vivid dream you remember.
You do you remember me?
What’s the point?
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Why oh the why

Contributed by little_genna on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 03:56:48 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



So much I wish to say,
Yet so little I manage to get further than my lips.
I don’t know what to think.
Should I even bother to say my words?
After all makes no sense to you.

I long for the tenderness of a kiss,
With the amount of love I used to have,
Just so passionless, oh why do I long for more passion.
Why can I not be content with what I’ve got.
Its not as if its not enough for most.
Yet just not enough for me.

Love no longer feels as if it is real,
Too long has it been since I felt it from anyone.
Yet so much love I still have to give, yet who can take that much.
I feel like I’ve already come to my end at an early age.
If there was a god why am I put through pain,
So much hurt and heartache, oh why.
Always taking loved ones

Feeling so alone, myself for true company.
Warped illusions of the oh so perfect hell hole that is life.
Dragged from one problem to the next, you’re meant to be my god!
Why do you constantly do this pain causing to me, you ****!
There’s only so much one person can take before breaking.
Well I guess finally I have reached it, happy now?
Shocked at how long it took you to get me here.

I always push my loved ones away.
It’s the safest thing I can do for them if they love me.
They need to understand I’m not completely together myself.
I deal with each day as it comes, it’s the only way I can.
I’m not strong; I can’t take that much anymore.
I’m an emotional wreckage of feeling.

No one truly understands my mind.
I need to break this circle before it breaks me.
I need to free my self from this trap that’s called life.
Yet there is no easy way to get this through
I do not want to be dead though.
Is this surprising?

I’m just a warped illusion,
Something to come from a dream
An image from a vivid dream you remember.
You do you remember me?
What’s the point?




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Re: Why oh the why (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 03:58:15 PM AEST
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very emotional and angry poem, but expressed well,

pixie xx


Re: Why oh the why (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 04:03:40 PM AEST
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Maybe you need to find yourself before you let others find you.. even though you push people away the ones that care and want to know you and respect you for who you are will come back.. no reason to keep on pushing them away.. great write.. i can relate to this very well..

~neglected1~


Re: Why oh the why (User Rating: 1 )
by Lost_Shadow on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 06:53:33 PM AEST
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I am the same except for 1 verse where I am completely the opposite. I understand how u r feeling. I was feeling this way before I ever knew you

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