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Array ( [sid] => 54433 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => hunger [time] => 2004-07-01 20:39:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => those tears that fall and subside
down ur soft skin is because of me
the blood that runs slowly from ur viens is because i wudnt let u in

these words of confusion that pour from my lips
made you put that razor blade in ur fingertips
and delve it deep into ur beautiful skin
i created ur fears and didnt bother to wipe away those tears

you were all that i wanted
but i didnt want to see it
this reality i guess it scaresme
violent love and sorrow
i just wanted some one to be there 2moro
i knew you would be
but i guess i didnt want you to be toprove my cruel reality
was the truth
and that all this time no one ever wanted me
but i guess the opne person i screwed over and i actually loved was you

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 48 [informant] => grip-wth-broken-fingers [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

hunger

Contributed by grip-wth-broken-fingers on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:39:01 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

those tears that fall and subside
down ur soft skin is because of me
the blood that runs slowly from ur viens is because i wudnt let u in

these words of confusion that pour from my lips
made you put that razor blade in ur fingertips
and delve it deep into ur beautiful skin
i created ur fears and didnt bother to wipe away those tears

you were all that i wanted
but i didnt want to see it
this reality i guess it scaresme
violent love and sorrow
i just wanted some one to be there 2moro
i knew you would be
but i guess i didnt want you to be toprove my cruel reality
was the truth
and that all this time no one ever wanted me
but i guess the opne person i screwed over and i actually loved was you

Copyright © grip-wth-broken-fingers ... [ 2004-07-01 20:39:01]
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Re: hunger (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:50:13 PM AEST
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aaww.. this is very sad but a very good write

i hope everything works out for you..

tugs and hugs
~neglected1~

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