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Array ( [sid] => 54497 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Phonecall [time] => 2004-07-02 09:01:58 [hometext] => After watching the late news tonight,I felt a need for a repost. :( [bodytext] => The Phonecall...
Hi ya babe,I'm running late
Yeah,I'm phoning from the cell
Stuck in this city's madness
Still I've good news to tell

How was your day,did you get my note
I left it by your keys
Just wanted to remind you
How much you mean to me

I went to see the doctor
In my lunch hour break
Yes Im fine,don't worry
It's sweet,the fuss you make

Have I mentioned that I love you
Yes,I say it all the time
But today I feel it even more
So happy you are mine

Well,listen babe,it's raining
And the traffics quite a mess
I should be home in an hour
Thirty minutes at its best

Oh you've cooked our dinner??
Sweetheart that's really great
And while we are eating
I'll fill you in on my lunch date

Ok babe,bye for now
See you in a while
Lotsa kisses,teddy hugs
And a great big happy smile

Excuse me sir,do you own
A blue and silver sedan
Well,I'm afraid I have bad news
I'll explain the best I can

You see sir,in the rain tonight
It's understood and known
A drunk driver hit your wife head on
Sir,she won't be coming home

Please sir,yes I'm sorry
But you'll have to come downtown
To identify her body
And collect her things we found

Im sorry for your loss sir
This must be hard for you
A drunken driver takes the lives
Of your wife,and baby too

I apologise,excuse me sir
I thought you were aware
There's confirmation of pregnancy
In the autopsy report there

Hi ya babe,yeah it's me
I'm calling from heavens door
I just called to say we love you
But wont be coming home no more

Have I mentioned that I love you
Yes,I say it all the time
But today I feel it even more
As I hold our baby,yours and mine

Ok babe,bye for now
We'll see you in a while
Lotsa kisses,teddy hugs
And a great big happy smile.... [comments] => 6 [counter] => 350 [topic] => 39 [informant] => LovingWhispers [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
The Phonecall

Contributed by LovingWhispers on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 09:01:58 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief



The Phonecall...
Hi ya babe,I'm running late
Yeah,I'm phoning from the cell
Stuck in this city's madness
Still I've good news to tell

How was your day,did you get my note
I left it by your keys
Just wanted to remind you
How much you mean to me

I went to see the doctor
In my lunch hour break
Yes Im fine,don't worry
It's sweet,the fuss you make

Have I mentioned that I love you
Yes,I say it all the time
But today I feel it even more
So happy you are mine

Well,listen babe,it's raining
And the traffics quite a mess
I should be home in an hour
Thirty minutes at its best

Oh you've cooked our dinner??
Sweetheart that's really great
And while we are eating
I'll fill you in on my lunch date

Ok babe,bye for now
See you in a while
Lotsa kisses,teddy hugs
And a great big happy smile

Excuse me sir,do you own
A blue and silver sedan
Well,I'm afraid I have bad news
I'll explain the best I can

You see sir,in the rain tonight
It's understood and known
A drunk driver hit your wife head on
Sir,she won't be coming home

Please sir,yes I'm sorry
But you'll have to come downtown
To identify her body
And collect her things we found

Im sorry for your loss sir
This must be hard for you
A drunken driver takes the lives
Of your wife,and baby too

I apologise,excuse me sir
I thought you were aware
There's confirmation of pregnancy
In the autopsy report there

Hi ya babe,yeah it's me
I'm calling from heavens door
I just called to say we love you
But wont be coming home no more

Have I mentioned that I love you
Yes,I say it all the time
But today I feel it even more
As I hold our baby,yours and mine

Ok babe,bye for now
We'll see you in a while
Lotsa kisses,teddy hugs
And a great big happy smile....




Copyright © LovingWhispers ... [ 2004-07-02 09:01:58]
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Re: The Phonecall (User Rating: 1 )
by _Raspberry_ on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 09:37:06 AM AEST
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Wow. This one made me cry. My brother-in-law was killed by a drunk driver. Very good, show people the worst so they can do the best.....


Re: The Phonecall (User Rating: 1 )
by WoodyMc44 on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 09:50:14 AM AEST
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My Oh My, now this is poetry, and its real, God Bless you and keep it coming. I will certainly be reading your stuff


Re: The Phonecall (User Rating: 1 )
by juliette on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:13:45 AM AEST
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This is so good.....and so sad. I love to read poetry with a point, a true message that comes across so blatantly and gracefully at the same time.
Thanks for sharing......
juliette


Re: The Phonecall (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:39:25 AM AEST
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I have a lump in my throat while reading this, this is awful, I am so so sorry ((((HUGS))))

You have written it beautiful I must say

pixie xx


Re: The Phonecall (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 05:19:10 AM AEST
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I cried so much reading these words, The tears dont want to stop falling for it was real and tore at my heart. May all take the message do NOT drink and drive it costs so many lives.

Beautifully written


Love Sweetangelukxxxx


Re: The Phonecall (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 06:34:10 PM AEST
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This is a good example of why I don't like to watch the news. Life can be so horribly tragic at times... and I'm often struck by how casually tragic news is shared and heard... I find comfort in knowing that at least one person was moved enough to write something so touching. You've impressed me in more ways than one.

Beautiful and incredibly thoughtful of you,
SNM




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