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Array ( [sid] => 54544 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sometimes i wish i could die [time] => 2004-07-02 16:12:08 [hometext] => this how i feel [bodytext] => Sometimes I just I could die
But then I relize that I am
the future in many eyes.
But if i was to really die who would cry or who would care?
i wanna jump in the road and get hit by a car
I just wanan take a knife and I don't know what i would do but that is how I feel
I don't tell nobody cause they would cry
Yes, I fear of dying and still i try
I don't know why but I want to
I'm ugly look at me
I have scares everywhere
mucles like a man
sure i can use a baking pan
but with corn rolls in my hair
and baggy pants to wear then a boy is what I bare
No one likes me they just lie
some people may use me cause iknow everybody
the white kids love me and black ones care
some people don't like me they just give me that evil stare
I don't know why i say i dont care but inside i really do
Boys call me ugly
saying i have a big butt but ugly face
some boys stand up for me when others call me ugly
but when i hear they callme ugly i wanna sit doen hide and cry
I have alot of friends but some of them lie to me and some look up to me
But still sometimes i wish i could die! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Cherriesbroken725 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Sometimes i wish i could die

Contributed by Cherriesbroken725 on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 04:12:08 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Sometimes I just I could die
But then I relize that I am
the future in many eyes.
But if i was to really die who would cry or who would care?
i wanna jump in the road and get hit by a car
I just wanan take a knife and I don't know what i would do but that is how I feel
I don't tell nobody cause they would cry
Yes, I fear of dying and still i try
I don't know why but I want to
I'm ugly look at me
I have scares everywhere
mucles like a man
sure i can use a baking pan
but with corn rolls in my hair
and baggy pants to wear then a boy is what I bare
No one likes me they just lie
some people may use me cause iknow everybody
the white kids love me and black ones care
some people don't like me they just give me that evil stare
I don't know why i say i dont care but inside i really do
Boys call me ugly
saying i have a big butt but ugly face
some boys stand up for me when others call me ugly
but when i hear they callme ugly i wanna sit doen hide and cry
I have alot of friends but some of them lie to me and some look up to me
But still sometimes i wish i could die!




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Re: Sometimes i wish i could die (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 04:46:21 PM AEST
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U write what u feel... from the heart... I can relate... I was teased in school as well... and probaly am still amde fun of... but u know what... I DON"T CARE!! Let em trash me... in the long run they're only hurting themsleves...
Good write... keep writing ...
~Donna~


Re: Sometimes i wish i could die (User Rating: 1 )
by Monkeybones99 on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 04:51:14 PM AEST
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I just want to say that last year at this time I finally tried to do what you write about because I felt the same but I'm here to tell you that beauty truly is on the inside and the people who can see are real the rest just don't matter.If you EVER need to talk email me at leftofcenter99@yahoo.com.

P.S. Keep writing down your feelings it is a great release of emotion.


Re: Sometimes i wish i could die (User Rating: 1 )
by poemprophet on Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 08:39:50 PM AEST
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good poem that a lot of people can relate to. we all have times that people put us down or degrade us. just stand tall and proud and be yourself. thats all that matters.




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