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"I only smile when I’m choking(on my heart) I’m only angry cos' I’m young I’m only bitter cos' she wont let me forget I only breathe cos' I feel hollow we only say "I love you" cos' the odds are against us"
volumes of books about the same sad kid with a different angry voice never catch the meaning with a metaphor for a plot keep your pages under lock and key mark them private under the word diary
I believe in love I believe in love
I believe in love I believe in love
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-mindless repenting-

Contributed by TaintedOptomist on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 04:43:39 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

open my pages figure out my story cos' I’ll be an open book with your pages still burning what's the difference between reality and a dream when you can lie remember when I said
"I only smile when I’m choking(on my heart) I’m only angry cos' I’m young I’m only bitter cos' she wont let me forget I only breathe cos' I feel hollow we only say "I love you" cos' the odds are against us"
volumes of books about the same sad kid with a different angry voice never catch the meaning with a metaphor for a plot keep your pages under lock and key mark them private under the word diary
I believe in love I believe in love
I believe in love I believe in love
love believe in me

Copyright Â© TaintedOptomist ... [ 2004-07-02 16:43:39]
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Re: -mindless repenting- (User Rating: 1 )
by Rissa on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 07:05:05 PM AEST
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Very interesting, Clay.

Re: -mindless repenting- (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedOptomist on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 07:46:29 PM AEST
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this is all i have been able to produce in the past few weeks really...sad i know, it's time for me to go home now i think....i hope...

Re: -mindless repenting- (User Rating: 1 )
by Always on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 02:22:59 PM AEST
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Sweeeeeet man, love believes....

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