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Array ( [sid] => 54583 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dark and Empty Soul [time] => 2004-07-02 22:00:46 [hometext] => PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [bodytext] => I can't free my heart of this hurting,
The feeling wont go away,

I wish to cry,
But the tears will not fall,
I want to be happy,
But the sadness holds me down,

There is no reason,
The feeling is just there,
And it wont leave,
I'm left here to grieve,

It's pulling me under everyday,
The darkness consumes me,
And I've lost my way,

I put on a fake smile,
To fool everyone,
But inside the sadness eats away,
Breaking me down,
Till I'm losing my mind,

I no longer have the power to win,
The fight that i'm fighting,
In my empty heart,
The sadness has torn me apart

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Dark and Empty Soul

Contributed by dirtyfool on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:00:46 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I can't free my heart of this hurting,
The feeling wont go away,

I wish to cry,
But the tears will not fall,
I want to be happy,
But the sadness holds me down,

There is no reason,
The feeling is just there,
And it wont leave,
I'm left here to grieve,

It's pulling me under everyday,
The darkness consumes me,
And I've lost my way,

I put on a fake smile,
To fool everyone,
But inside the sadness eats away,
Breaking me down,
Till I'm losing my mind,

I no longer have the power to win,
The fight that i'm fighting,
In my empty heart,
The sadness has torn me apart

Copyright © dirtyfool ... [ 2004-07-02 22:00:46]
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Re: Dark and Empty Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:05:23 PM AEST
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this is indeed a sad write. very powerful.

great job.

the voice

Re: Dark and Empty Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:29:01 PM AEST
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this is sad.. its like your twisting and pushing through the whole thing .. i hope for the best of luck to you and eventually you come out of your darkened hole..

~neglected1~

Re: Dark and Empty Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 08:37:55 AM AEST
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i feel your over flowing pain.
i too have felt this darkness.
i know the way you're feeling.
i understand your hurt, even though i don't know why you have it.
... but your poem!
it is just excellent!
try to keep your chin up.
try to be better than what you are.
time will past and you'll feel better.
it does get better!

Re: Dark and Empty Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 11:37:42 AM AEST
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awww this is sad.....written well tho..

pixie xx

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