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Array ( [sid] => 54596 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Madness in Him [time] => 2004-07-03 00:07:36 [hometext] => For you sister [bodytext] => They get in fights all the time,

All I can do is cry for her,

She's been misused,

All of her belongings thrown around broken lying motionless upon the floor,

" I'm afraid for you sister, i'm afraid what he might do next to you,

I hold back the tears as I hear of another fight,

She goes right back to him with the same love that she remembered,

His temper out of control rages,

"What will he do next what will he do to you!"

She can not reply for she doesn't know what he will do,

I can not take this no more,

Her pain and sorrow is released with out her sense of knowing,

I feel her pain and anguish,

Feeling everything that she felt,

I can't believe she went through this with out our family knowing,

She's strong but how strong against him,

Will I be there next time like the time we went for a drive,

Will he try to run you off the road,

Will he crash into you and kill you right there and then,

I don't want to find my sister is gone,

I love you sister with all my heart please don't go. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 13 [informant] => blossomingcherry5353 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

The Madness in Him

Contributed by blossomingcherry5353 on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 12:07:36 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

They get in fights all the time,

All I can do is cry for her,

She's been misused,

All of her belongings thrown around broken lying motionless upon the floor,

" I'm afraid for you sister, i'm afraid what he might do next to you,

I hold back the tears as I hear of another fight,

She goes right back to him with the same love that she remembered,

His temper out of control rages,

"What will he do next what will he do to you!"

She can not reply for she doesn't know what he will do,

I can not take this no more,

Her pain and sorrow is released with out her sense of knowing,

I feel her pain and anguish,

Feeling everything that she felt,

I can't believe she went through this with out our family knowing,

She's strong but how strong against him,

Will I be there next time like the time we went for a drive,

Will he try to run you off the road,

Will he crash into you and kill you right there and then,

I don't want to find my sister is gone,

I love you sister with all my heart please don't go.

Copyright © blossomingcherry5353 ... [ 2004-07-03 00:07:36]
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Re: The Madness in Him (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 12:30:27 AM AEST
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a heartbreaking lament

Re: The Madness in Him (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 11:08:01 PM AEST
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This is so heartbreaking. I can't imagine having to witness such terrible things happening to my sister. My prayers are with you and her...

Re: The Madness in Him (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygirl1991 on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 12:04:33 AM AEST
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great poem very sad though...mi poem doesnt have much to do with this situation but can yew please read mi poem called "the real thing" thanks keep writing~Chrissy~

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