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Array ( [sid] => 5469 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => If You I Will [time] => 2002-10-23 09:30:00 [hometext] => This poem was based on something I said to her last week. It was a lot to remember so, some of what I had said may not be here and some of what's here may never have been said, but it's close. You can kind of look at it as all the promisses I've made her, but in detail. [bodytext] => If you walk, I will follow
If you leave, I will be hollow
If you run, I will be right behind
If you lose the way, I will try to remind
If you take the wrong path, I will walk it too
If you stumble, I will support you
If you become lost, I will guide you home
If you need help, my hand I will loan
If you fall, I will catch you
If you want commitment, I will be true
If you need advice, I will do my best
If you can’t decide, I will suggest
If you’re sad, I will make you smile
If you need me there, I will travel a thousand miles
If you get cold, I will keep you warm
If you want sex, I will perform
If you become sick, I will be your nurse
If you become embarrassed, I will do something worse
If you’re lonely, I will be there
If you need comfort, I will play with your hair
If you’re in pain, your pain I will sooth
If you don’t believe, my love I will prove
If you make a mistake, I will help you through
If you become tired, I will carry you
If you’re afraid, you I will protect
If you need attention, you I will never neglect
If you need space, I will give it to you
If you make a wish, I will try to make it come true
If you dream, I will try to make it real
If you’re hungry, I will cook a nice meal
If you have goals, your goals I will help you attain
If you want time, here I will remain
If you’re upset, I will be just as blue
If you’re angry, I will calm you
If you’re angry at me, I will love you still
If you have a desire, I will strive to fulfill
If you have doubts, those I will erase
If you need a hug, I will give my loving embrace
If you have questions, the answer I will find
If your beauty should fade, I will be blind
If you happen to cry, I will cry too
If you want to go places, I will take you
If you want spontaneity, I will take you right now
If you want marriage, I will take the vow
If you want children, I will be their father
If you want forever, once again I will offer
If you want romance, I will supply it at times
If you need love, I will always give mine
If you have ideas, I will lend my ear
If your body aches, I will message you my dear
If you want something, I will give it to you
If you want something of mine, I’ll split it in two
If you’re bored, I will entertain
If you say I’m crazy, I will admit for you I'm insane
If you want a fairytale, I will be your knight
If you say I’m wrong, I will admit when you’re right
If you want to be a queen, I will be your king
If you have a rough day, I will tuck you in
If you frown, I will make that frown fade
If you want me to clean, well, I will hire a maid
If you love me, I will be the happiest man alive
If you give us a chance, your wishes, I will never deprive
If your not satisfied, I will give more
Whatever you need, is what I will always be here for [comments] => 9 [counter] => 262 [topic] => 2 [informant] => MisterRight [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
If You I Will

Contributed by MisterRight on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



If you walk, I will follow
If you leave, I will be hollow
If you run, I will be right behind
If you lose the way, I will try to remind
If you take the wrong path, I will walk it too
If you stumble, I will support you
If you become lost, I will guide you home
If you need help, my hand I will loan
If you fall, I will catch you
If you want commitment, I will be true
If you need advice, I will do my best
If you can’t decide, I will suggest
If you’re sad, I will make you smile
If you need me there, I will travel a thousand miles
If you get cold, I will keep you warm
If you want sex, I will perform
If you become sick, I will be your nurse
If you become embarrassed, I will do something worse
If you’re lonely, I will be there
If you need comfort, I will play with your hair
If you’re in pain, your pain I will sooth
If you don’t believe, my love I will prove
If you make a mistake, I will help you through
If you become tired, I will carry you
If you’re afraid, you I will protect
If you need attention, you I will never neglect
If you need space, I will give it to you
If you make a wish, I will try to make it come true
If you dream, I will try to make it real
If you’re hungry, I will cook a nice meal
If you have goals, your goals I will help you attain
If you want time, here I will remain
If you’re upset, I will be just as blue
If you’re angry, I will calm you
If you’re angry at me, I will love you still
If you have a desire, I will strive to fulfill
If you have doubts, those I will erase
If you need a hug, I will give my loving embrace
If you have questions, the answer I will find
If your beauty should fade, I will be blind
If you happen to cry, I will cry too
If you want to go places, I will take you
If you want spontaneity, I will take you right now
If you want marriage, I will take the vow
If you want children, I will be their father
If you want forever, once again I will offer
If you want romance, I will supply it at times
If you need love, I will always give mine
If you have ideas, I will lend my ear
If your body aches, I will message you my dear
If you want something, I will give it to you
If you want something of mine, I’ll split it in two
If you’re bored, I will entertain
If you say I’m crazy, I will admit for you I'm insane
If you want a fairytale, I will be your knight
If you say I’m wrong, I will admit when you’re right
If you want to be a queen, I will be your king
If you have a rough day, I will tuck you in
If you frown, I will make that frown fade
If you want me to clean, well, I will hire a maid
If you love me, I will be the happiest man alive
If you give us a chance, your wishes, I will never deprive
If your not satisfied, I will give more
Whatever you need, is what I will always be here for




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Re: If You I Will (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 09:55:30 AM AEST
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Oh my gosh, this is beautiful and so sweet! It's everything anyone could ever ask for!

lol don't mind me I'm a little hyper :D

~ MoonlitAngel


Re: If You I Will (User Rating: 1 )
by nonamegirl on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 12:03:17 PM AEST
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I can't believe you came up with sooo many If you / i will pairs!!! It's a great poem.


Re: If You I Will (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 12:21:34 PM AEST
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Well done another great write,from Mr.Right!
You never sees to amaze me! This girl has to be crazy to let you slip away! You need to check out my poem,Breaking up leads to sorrow! It's a true story about a friend of mine!
Bravo!!! Christina


Re: If You I Will (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 01:18:01 PM AEST
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Whatever you need, is what I will always be here for....

Wow... I love that line!!! another awesome write... and again, all you have to do is what and see, and keep all those promises! You actually told her you would hire a maid???? Can you clone yourself and have your clone fall for me??? I could use someone like you in my life ;)

I hope that you are seeing a solution... I saw that comment on one of my poems about not wanting to talk about plans... I hope that can change... plans are a good thing... however, I know that in this case, that doesn't seem to be working...

Hope you are feeling a little less blue!!! This was another great write from you!

Ginnie


Re: If You I Will (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 11:10:10 PM AEST
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This is beautiful.. what else could a girl ask for?... Good Luck Curtis!


Re: If You I Will (User Rating: 1 )
by TigerBird81 on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 03:54:33 AM AEST
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This poem is beautiful!!!!

Keep up the good work so i can continue to read and weep!!!!

Your poet friend Tiger Bird x x


Re: If You I Will (User Rating: 1 )
by TigerBird81 on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 03:54:58 AM AEST
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This poem is beautiful!!!!

Keep up the good work so i can continue to read and weep!!!!

Your poet friend Tiger Bird x x


Re: If You I Will (User Rating: 1 )
by princesspurty on Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 08:06:12 AM AEST
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so beautiful, wish i was the one this was for, she's very lucky


Re: If You I Will (User Rating: 1 )
by BluGurl6 on Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 04:25:42 AM AEST
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this is SO sweet.....that's one lucky girl!!




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