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Array ( [sid] => 5480 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I'll Show You [time] => 2002-10-23 12:15:00 [hometext] => The other night she asked me to "show her" meaning show her the way. Or show her that this is real. Or that I won't change. I really try to, but I've show her everything I can in this position. I can't show her I won't change once we're together, unless she gives us the chance to be together. And I don't know if she'll let us be together unless I can show her. See the problem? [bodytext] => The other night you asked me to show you
Oh, how I try to every day
From where you have me, it can’t be done
But give us one chance and I’ll lead the way
I’ll show you the one who will never change
I’ll show you a heart forever honest and true
I’ll show you the love you’ve always desired
I’ll show you a world that revolves around you
I’ll show you things you’ve never dreamed
I’ll show you happiness you’ve never planned
I’ll show you commitment with no reason to doubt
I’ll show you true love if you’ll take my hand [comments] => 7 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 2 [informant] => MisterRight [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

I'll Show You

Contributed by MisterRight on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 12:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The other night you asked me to show you
Oh, how I try to every day
From where you have me, it can’t be done
But give us one chance and I’ll lead the way
I’ll show you the one who will never change
I’ll show you a heart forever honest and true
I’ll show you the love you’ve always desired
I’ll show you a world that revolves around you
I’ll show you things you’ve never dreamed
I’ll show you happiness you’ve never planned
I’ll show you commitment with no reason to doubt
I’ll show you true love if you’ll take my hand

Copyright Â© MisterRight ... [ 2002-10-23 12:15:00]
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Re: I'll Show You (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 12:27:32 PM AEST
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But first she has to take your hand... isn't that the way of life??? Wishin' ya the best of luck (with my horrible Southern twang... lol)... hope she reads this 'ne.

Ginnie

Re: I'll Show You (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 12:31:07 PM AEST
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Ok stop I really had enough! these poems are really getting to me! She really needs to read these poems of yours! I will have to say,she inspires you to write great poetry!Bravo again! Christina

Re: I'll Show You (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 01:26:36 PM AEST
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Hey, Dolphin... SHOW HER...SHOW HER, man... I'm sure after she sees it, she'll relent... :>)
Seriously, I wish you all the best!! You seem to be between the devil and the dark blue sea....
Hugs,
An old mermaid....

Re: I'll Show You (User Rating: 1 )
by viola on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 11:04:59 PM AEST
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I understand it can be hard to show people but cliches say "sink or swim". Good luck to you.

Re: I'll Show You (User Rating: 1 )
by spaceotter on Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 07:25:45 AM AEST
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Good write! Love does change in time, but if she likes what she sees, the root of that love won't ever go away.

Re: I'll Show You (User Rating: 1 )
by unpredictable on Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 09:19:00 AM AEST
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awsome writing, i love all of your poems, wish you the best of luck. . .

Re: I'll Show You (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 07:50:33 PM AEST
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If you've shown her everything
that you can, then i would have
to question who is blind.
Great write, i enjoyed
reading this
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

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