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Everyone needs to learn to cope
It shows no matter what happens on earth
God is the one who gave us birth
He has all of us under his control
He will Clean you up and make you whole
He promises that evil will not last forever
That devil thinks he is so clever
The wonderful reward that is waiting
Our lives he has been recreating
For those who believe in Jesus Christ
You better make a big sacrifice
Because as our Savior and Lord
We will all get our reward

Gwendolyn Marie Barden
Copyright ©2004 Gwendolyn Marie Barden

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REVELATION

Contributed by GODSBESTIMAGE on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 12:36:53 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Revelation is above all a book of hope
Everyone needs to learn to cope
It shows no matter what happens on earth
God is the one who gave us birth
He has all of us under his control
He will Clean you up and make you whole
He promises that evil will not last forever
That devil thinks he is so clever
The wonderful reward that is waiting
Our lives he has been recreating
For those who believe in Jesus Christ
You better make a big sacrifice
Because as our Savior and Lord
We will all get our reward

Gwendolyn Marie Barden
Copyright ©2004 Gwendolyn Marie Barden

Copyright Â© GODSBESTIMAGE ... [ 2004-07-05 00:36:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: REVELATION (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 11:25:44 PM AEST
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excellent write! preach the truth

Re: REVELATION (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 02:14:59 AM AEST
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I like it. You keep good rhyme through the whole thing, many people don;t bother to do that.
Take care
David

Re: REVELATION (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 09:53:57 PM AEST
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good write. i in no shape or form find any truth in this, but oh well.

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