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Array ( [sid] => 54861 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Lied [time] => 2004-07-05 14:32:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>
you said you would not hurt me,,,
said you would wipe away my tears...
but all u have done is make me cry...
and increased my greatest fears!!!

you said you would care...
no matter what i say...
but u traeted me like *****...
in every *****in way...

i tried to prove to u some how...
that i really did care....
but how can i try to help....
if you treat me unfair....

you told me i was beautiful...
said you would never do me wrong....
i must have ***** up....
cuz you weren't around that long...

i have cried the tears i needed to cry...
now it's time to finally smile...
at least as far as i think....
but it won't happen for a while!

you cut.....
at one point i did too...
almost killed yourself....
***** i am just like you....

so why start to hate me....
why start to talk *****???
i am 10 seconds away....
from saying i quit...

i want you to understand....
why i said what i said....
i have lost so many people...
people that cared for me are dead...

now i am alone...
with no one by my side...
said you would never make me cry....
but i fear that u have lied!!!!!!!!!!!

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 22 [informant] => devils_daughter18 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
You Lied

Contributed by devils_daughter18 on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 02:32:43 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove




you said you would not hurt me,,,
said you would wipe away my tears...
but all u have done is make me cry...
and increased my greatest fears!!!

you said you would care...
no matter what i say...
but u traeted me like *****...
in every *****in way...

i tried to prove to u some how...
that i really did care....
but how can i try to help....
if you treat me unfair....

you told me i was beautiful...
said you would never do me wrong....
i must have ***** up....
cuz you weren't around that long...

i have cried the tears i needed to cry...
now it's time to finally smile...
at least as far as i think....
but it won't happen for a while!

you cut.....
at one point i did too...
almost killed yourself....
***** i am just like you....

so why start to hate me....
why start to talk *****???
i am 10 seconds away....
from saying i quit...

i want you to understand....
why i said what i said....
i have lost so many people...
people that cared for me are dead...

now i am alone...
with no one by my side...
said you would never make me cry....
but i fear that u have lied!!!!!!!!!!!





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Re: You Lied (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 02:52:06 PM AEST
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sorry for your pain, great write tho....

pixie xx


Re: You Lied (User Rating: 1 )
by babygirl2004 on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:07:19 PM AEST
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good poem it comes from the heart and thats what makes it good


Re: You Lied (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 11:15:07 PM AEST
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Sad poetics of a wounded angel. I'm sorry for the past. But tomorrow's a new day, And one day all people should have the feeling of shelter. And that shelter might not be a house, but it will keep you dry.

This is the weirdest life I've ever lived.
But i believe it's in you, I believe in you.I believe you will make it thru, so please take care. My prayers of comfort go out to you.




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