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[aid] => mick
[title] => Writing while under the influence
[time] => 2004-07-06 01:14:05
[hometext] => I'm only drinking milk...really. It's warm and gross.
[bodytext] => This is an attempt at a poem but i'm really not in the mood so i'll jabber and make things rhyme until my brain is totally screwed .... It's really not as easy as it appears this takes a lot of thinking but for those ones who like honesty it also involves some drinking .... Though, writing under the influence isn't necessarily right Poe, a genious some have said but is marrying your cousin bright? .... Okay, so i admit, some of his works are fine but what is with all the big words all of which i have to look up to define .... So i'm not the brightest crayon in the box, i write only what i know and so maybe that isn't much either but atleast it i admit to being slow .... I'll take my time and chew my words crunch down and suck the flavor i may stick to the hamburger and fries of writing but it's something everyone can savor .... Okay, now this poems sounds a bit defensive and i guess that's understandable, writing isn't an easy thing but atleast it's exapandable .... I can stretch the truth, but it's not lying It's really an easy concept, in the writing world we call it "implying" .... Yes, you know what i mean, when one thing "implies" another like when "you remind me of someone." really means, "you look like your mother." .... We can skate around the truth, by using big words to feel smart but sometimes it just isn't as fun as several tiny words from the heart .... Oh, yes i should of ended there, that last verse did make a nice ending but i'm still in the mood for endlings rhyming so this poem is...pending. .... May it will never end, what a stroke of luck i should end it on a stupid note because i'm just that sort of schmuck ..... So this is the conclustion to my little poem it's going to cause some frustration because the last line isn't going to rhyme didn't see that coming, did you? [comments] => 6 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 64 [informant] => C2C [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )
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