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As I know what I must do
Dusk fills the skies
As I begin to tell you

I open up my mouth
I feel like I'm choking,
I force the words out
Fear removes it's cloaking

The clouds release the rain
Bringing me the strength
'I don't feel the same'
A phrase thought through at length

'You just weren't ready
We were pushed way too soon
Yes, our arguments are petty
But I realize something new

My love is for who you are
But I keep pushing you to change
One day I'll push too far...
You'll become what I arrange

I hope that you will grow
To more than what I have in mind
Create yourself and show
The world what you have inside

I gave up on my perfect
Instead I tried to mould you
Trapped in an image I inflict
I've grown too tired to hold you

I think it's best we separate
I know, she holds us back
But if we stay only for her sake
It may set her life off track

I know I made a promise
We'll work a little harder
I'm only being honest
This might not go on much farther

I hope you know I love you
And pray we can stay friends
I just don't want to control you
This way of life must end...
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In the End

Contributed by _Raspberry_ on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 11:26:47 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Tears fill my eyes,
As I know what I must do
Dusk fills the skies
As I begin to tell you

I open up my mouth
I feel like I'm choking,
I force the words out
Fear removes it's cloaking

The clouds release the rain
Bringing me the strength
'I don't feel the same'
A phrase thought through at length

'You just weren't ready
We were pushed way too soon
Yes, our arguments are petty
But I realize something new

My love is for who you are
But I keep pushing you to change
One day I'll push too far...
You'll become what I arrange

I hope that you will grow
To more than what I have in mind
Create yourself and show
The world what you have inside

I gave up on my perfect
Instead I tried to mould you
Trapped in an image I inflict
I've grown too tired to hold you

I think it's best we separate
I know, she holds us back
But if we stay only for her sake
It may set her life off track

I know I made a promise
We'll work a little harder
I'm only being honest
This might not go on much farther

I hope you know I love you
And pray we can stay friends
I just don't want to control you
This way of life must end...

Copyright © _Raspberry_ ... [ 2004-07-06 11:26:47]
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Re: In the End (User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 11:53:49 AM AEST
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Good write and it would be nice if more people felt like that last stanza.
Well done.

Re: In the End (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 12:26:06 PM AEST
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You are a good poet, therefore you're intelligent enough to know you have another option short of seperation. Thats right - change YOUR ways. God Bless

Re: In the End (User Rating: 1 )
by gery_giggles on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:45:13 PM AEST
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sad write..and i hope everything works out..good luck
luv always

Re: In the End (User Rating: 1 )
by WestCPunk on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 08:04:06 PM AEST
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Great writing, yet sad. Hope all goes well!

Re: In the End (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 05:09:15 PM AEST
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Well written.

Re: In the End (User Rating: 1 )
by rao0oar on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 07:05:46 PM AEST
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that is a wounderfull peom and i agree with black13 on the last stanza i only hope the best for you good job keep goin follow ur dreams!!!!

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