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Array ( [sid] => 55024 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A peace of mind. [time] => 2004-07-06 16:41:13 [hometext] => As the other one got deleted.. This is about a time when I couldnt handle reality. This is what kept me sane. Thoughts of what I could do.. wanted too do.... Didnt save it but Ill try and re-write it. [bodytext] => As I lay in bed
I think of times
I think of guys
That have passed by

The sounds of you *****
The cokehead your lovin
I thought you loved the other
But your moans dont tell me so

I cant take it no more its time too end this
Ill find our knife and finish you both
I come through your room with and watch
The energy he has
It must be the lines

I take the knife I stab his black heart
You scream as I cry
Its worth taking my pain away
You stare at my tears
There filled with such pain
But you never cared
Or so it seems

Its time too end
For your lifes bound too this knife
You say these words
"What have I done"
I look at you
And start too laugh
You know what youve done
Hurt too many years
Im just a laugh for you

Room filled with blood
Power in my hand
Your throat is mine
For ill suck your blood
Spray it on me
As I decorate you
Your no more
The pain no more


[comments] => 2 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 13 [informant] => heartfilledblood [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
A peace of mind.

Contributed by heartfilledblood on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 04:41:13 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



As I lay in bed
I think of times
I think of guys
That have passed by

The sounds of you *****
The cokehead your lovin
I thought you loved the other
But your moans dont tell me so

I cant take it no more its time too end this
Ill find our knife and finish you both
I come through your room with and watch
The energy he has
It must be the lines

I take the knife I stab his black heart
You scream as I cry
Its worth taking my pain away
You stare at my tears
There filled with such pain
But you never cared
Or so it seems

Its time too end
For your lifes bound too this knife
You say these words
"What have I done"
I look at you
And start too laugh
You know what youve done
Hurt too many years
Im just a laugh for you

Room filled with blood
Power in my hand
Your throat is mine
For ill suck your blood
Spray it on me
As I decorate you
Your no more
The pain no more






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Re: A peace of mind. (User Rating: 1 )
by Mick_Puttock on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 04:48:57 PM AEST
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If you need a copy of your original, send me a PM. If it was deleted it would have been due to content, as one word in this poem had to be edited. Please remember, this site has rules.

Mick


Re: A peace of mind. (User Rating: 1 )
by Heartfilledblood on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 04:53:37 PM AEST
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Than why delete the originall if one word had to be edited... You obviously edited it for me thanks why not before... I understand this place has rules I would like the orginal for this is the only place I can store my poems without having close friends or relitaves read them. ( Dont ask why )




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