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Array ( [sid] => 55048 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Make Me One With Rain [time] => 2004-07-06 20:19:45 [hometext] => [bodytext] => eat these problems away from me
swallow them into non-existence
ease my sorrow and the feel of being lonely
Breath away my pain.
Kidnap me into the stars,

Make Me One With Rain.

Dry these tears from my eyes,
and drown my fears that control my life.
Surround me with the presence of happiness
and not the solitude of pain.

Make Me One With Rain.

Let me dance through the air,
Feel freedom at my fingertips.
Fly from a spacious beauty,
labeled a sky.
To fall away from pain,

Make Me One With Rain.

I will be the music,
that drifts you off to sleep.
I will be the fingers tapping your window
as you sit and weep.
I will soak you with my love
wet you with my kisses.
on dry, dry months
I’m the one everyone misses.
please let me slip away from pain...

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Make Me One With Rain

Contributed by xxbreathlessx on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 08:19:45 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

eat these problems away from me
swallow them into non-existence
ease my sorrow and the feel of being lonely
Breath away my pain.
Kidnap me into the stars,

Make Me One With Rain.

Dry these tears from my eyes,
and drown my fears that control my life.
Surround me with the presence of happiness
and not the solitude of pain.

Make Me One With Rain.

Let me dance through the air,
Feel freedom at my fingertips.
Fly from a spacious beauty,
labeled a sky.
To fall away from pain,

Make Me One With Rain.

I will be the music,
that drifts you off to sleep.
I will be the fingers tapping your window
as you sit and weep.
I will soak you with my love
wet you with my kisses.
on dry, dry months
I’m the one everyone misses.
please let me slip away from pain...

Make Me One With Rain.

Copyright © xxbreathlessx ... [ 2004-07-06 20:19:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Make Me One With Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by RobertKilpatrick on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 08:33:43 PM AEST
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Powerful. Very good use of words.

Re: Make Me One With Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 08:42:34 PM AEST
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please let me slip away from pain...
Make Me One With Rain

wow love that line! this was awesome. loved it. nicely written. powerful. well done keep it up.
Arden

Re: Make Me One With Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinful_Misery on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 09:04:51 PM AEST
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Hey thanks for the comments :) You are an awesome writer as well. This poem is moving.

Re: Make Me One With Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacquelynne on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 10:34:11 PM AEST
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this is really good, it sounds like song lyrics, so rythmic and moving. Have you, or will you, put music behind it? you should....

hugs'n'kisses

jenni
aka
jac

Re: Make Me One With Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 08:07:24 PM AEST
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sweet:) hugs n' love nessa

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