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Array ( [sid] => 55112 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My soul is gone forever dead... [time] => 2004-07-07 02:17:07 [hometext] => well it is...read and comment if you want....THANKS>>> [bodytext] => I tried to act,
Like nothing was wrong,
But I've been sad,
For far too long,

I don't like to bother,
So I'll go away,
I don't want to depress anyone,
So I can't stay,

Even though help,
I do seek,
My future still,
Looks very bleek,

There's not much else,
I have to say,
I sit alone,
Day by day,

But don't worry,
Forget about me,
I guess a poet,
I'll never be,

I am sad,
I won't lie,
To tell the truth,
I don't wanna die,

I was a fighter,
Born and bred,
But now I'm nothing,
Because my Soul is Dead...

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 52 [informant] => Living_In_My_Dream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

My soul is gone forever dead...

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 02:17:07 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

I tried to act,
Like nothing was wrong,
But I've been sad,
For far too long,

I don't like to bother,
So I'll go away,
I don't want to depress anyone,
So I can't stay,

Even though help,
I do seek,
My future still,
Looks very bleek,

There's not much else,
I have to say,
I sit alone,
Day by day,

But don't worry,
Forget about me,
I guess a poet,
I'll never be,

I am sad,
I won't lie,
To tell the truth,
I don't wanna die,

I was a fighter,
Born and bred,
But now I'm nothing,
Because my Soul is Dead...

Copyright © Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-07-07 02:17:07]
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Re: My soul is gone forever dead... (User Rating: 1 )
by the_story_of_the_year on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 02:22:09 AM AEST
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Feel like you're in a hole my friend? There's a light at the end. You have talent as a writer. Let your feelings bleed into poetry. Good luck with everything.

Re: My soul is gone forever dead... (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 02:47:57 AM AEST
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You do have talent as a poet .
very talented .be stronge and stand tall.
It will get better...

Re: My soul is gone forever dead... (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 05:45:21 AM AEST
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I think you are already a great poet.
You dont need to have a piece of paper to tell you you are a poet,
Its is a part of you.
And you are not alone.
Please stay strong.
If you wanna talk im here.
*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: My soul is gone forever dead... (User Rating: 1 )
by fastpitchqt on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 06:14:28 PM AEST
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you are an amazing poet, dont doubt yourself! Ive felt this exact same way before, sadly enough it still hasent completely passed. Keep up the writing. Check out my writing sometime and comment on it!Thx, take care!

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