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Array ( [sid] => 55113 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The long lost wind...to carry me through... [time] => 2004-07-07 02:20:06 [hometext] => A desperate sounding poem of mine...ugh...lol read and comment if you wish... [bodytext] => I want to bleed
Satisfy this need
Forget I live
For all I give

I need to cut
It's in my gut
The need
To bleed

Water, Spring, Life
Ice, Winter, Knife
Alone in the dark
Looking for my lark.

My lonely lark
With that special mark
Of love and beauty
And of faithful duty.

Call me greedy
Call me needy
I only crave love
The kind of...

A lonely seashore
Leaves me wanting more
To find that one
To take this ton.

To bleed is to live
To die is to give
Give me a blade
My future is made

Not to go on
It was a con
My life...
A knife

A dove, a lark
A light for the dark
Maybe you?
If not, then who?

I have no where to turn
I want to die and burn
You give me everything
Yet, you give me nothing

Crying and dying
Your lying
To me...

I live for you
I die for you
I cry for you
I want you
I need you
I love you
I hate you
I love you...
I love you...
I love you...

Don't you see it?
The pain, the hurt
Don't you feel my love?
I love you
You hate me...

Love
Hurt
Bleeding
Pain
Cutting
Dying
Kiss me
Kill me
Bleed me
Leave me... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Living_In_My_Dream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
The long lost wind...to carry me through...

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 02:20:06 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I want to bleed
Satisfy this need
Forget I live
For all I give

I need to cut
It's in my gut
The need
To bleed

Water, Spring, Life
Ice, Winter, Knife
Alone in the dark
Looking for my lark.

My lonely lark
With that special mark
Of love and beauty
And of faithful duty.

Call me greedy
Call me needy
I only crave love
The kind of...

A lonely seashore
Leaves me wanting more
To find that one
To take this ton.

To bleed is to live
To die is to give
Give me a blade
My future is made

Not to go on
It was a con
My life...
A knife

A dove, a lark
A light for the dark
Maybe you?
If not, then who?

I have no where to turn
I want to die and burn
You give me everything
Yet, you give me nothing

Crying and dying
Your lying
To me...

I live for you
I die for you
I cry for you
I want you
I need you
I love you
I hate you
I love you...
I love you...
I love you...

Don't you see it?
The pain, the hurt
Don't you feel my love?
I love you
You hate me...

Love
Hurt
Bleeding
Pain
Cutting
Dying
Kiss me
Kill me
Bleed me
Leave me...




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Re: The long lost wind...to carry me through... (User Rating: 1 )
by the_story_of_the_year on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 02:26:38 AM AEST
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The confusion and un-organized nature of this write make it enjoyable. Good job friend.


Re: The long lost wind...to carry me through... (User Rating: 1 )
by wakegurl77 on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 09:55:07 AM AEST
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Great poem i cant totally relate you can just put into words better than i
Allways sincere
Leana


Re: The long lost wind...to carry me through... (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:09:15 PM AEST
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very unique style.. the words were so direct and short, it made this very powerful. beautiful*


Re: The long lost wind...to carry me through... (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 11:29:33 PM AEST
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this was good but i don't get into the rhyming. but it was very expressive and honest. good write.




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