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Array ( [sid] => 55114 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dear Friend...My Explanation.... [time] => 2004-07-07 02:24:33 [hometext] => This is my explantion that I wrote about my cutting...I wrote it for my friends so they would understand...but now I want to die... [bodytext] => I thought you understood
The things im going through
How tough it is
Best friend, is that the name I called you?


You made me feel important
I thought you cared for me
I relayed on your support
But I guess the true you I see


Times were hard
I know it was hard for you to
But I didn't think there was anything we couldn't get through


I guess I am shocked
I thought you understood my pain
I guess not so let me explain


It helps me to cope,
Though my methods aren't the best.
Don't say there's no hope,
Stop being such a pest.


Though you can't understand me,
I can't quit just 'cuz you say.
As much as I'd like to,
It doesn't work that way.


It's more addictive than smoking,
Once you start you can't stop.
You know my secret,
But please don't blow your top.


You can't understand me,
I have nothing to give.
I'm not trying to die
It's just my way to live.

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Dear Friend...My Explanation....

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 02:24:33 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I thought you understood
The things im going through
How tough it is
Best friend, is that the name I called you?


You made me feel important
I thought you cared for me
I relayed on your support
But I guess the true you I see


Times were hard
I know it was hard for you to
But I didn't think there was anything we couldn't get through


I guess I am shocked
I thought you understood my pain
I guess not so let me explain


It helps me to cope,
Though my methods aren't the best.
Don't say there's no hope,
Stop being such a pest.


Though you can't understand me,
I can't quit just 'cuz you say.
As much as I'd like to,
It doesn't work that way.


It's more addictive than smoking,
Once you start you can't stop.
You know my secret,
But please don't blow your top.


You can't understand me,
I have nothing to give.
I'm not trying to die
It's just my way to live.





Copyright © Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-07-07 02:24:33]
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Re: Dear Friend...My Explanation.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Heartfilledblood on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 02:47:23 AM AEST
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This is a good write but sad poem. If you need someone too talk too you can talk too me. To hear that you want too take your life is not good.
You can pm me anytime.

HeartFilledBlood


Re: Dear Friend...My Explanation.... (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 02:51:21 AM AEST
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As you can see were all here for you.
cutting yourself is not the answer..
It's just going to get worst if you don't get help..If you need to talk you can pm me too.


Re: Dear Friend...My Explanation.... (User Rating: 1 )
by LOSTinU on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:35:34 AM AEST
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My best friend the only person ive ever cared about cutts herself. I wish i could i help but i know i cant. she used to talk to me about it and she says i was the only person who embraced it. so if u need some to talk to or whatever contact me


Re: Dear Friend...My Explanation.... (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 05:41:48 AM AEST
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Good poem, but so sad.
Its hard when friends dont understand.
If you need someone to talk to just PM me.
Trust me...cutting is not the answer, but i know it is hard to getout of.
Be strong.
*hugs* Phil xxx


Re: Dear Friend...My Explanation.... (User Rating: 1 )
by wakegurl77 on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:16:45 AM AEST
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the only way to get out of cutting is by convincing yourself that you dont need to anymore trust me my friends all tried to get me to stop that just got me going more now ive realised that they all just care for me and thats why they did that but its ultmately your decesion to stop as long as you stay away from major veins its a good way to let go of your pain it worked for me when i needed it you will stop when you dont need it anymore whatever your going through thats causeing you to do this is what you need to talk about with people not that fact that your cutting thats what got me out!! hope you figure out whats causeing you to do this and over come it
Allways Sincere **hugs**
Leana


Re: Dear Friend...My Explanation.... (User Rating: 1 )
by MDodgen on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:53:05 AM AEST
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You can't understand me,
I have nothing to give.
I'm not trying to die
It's just my way to live

that stanza says it all. beautiful write.


Re: Dear Friend...My Explanation.... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 11:01:16 AM AEST
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great write, but briming with sadness,you know where I am if you need a friend,

takecare
pixie xx


Re: Dear Friend...My Explanation.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:13:43 PM AEST
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i understand what you're going through.. no one ever bothers to help you with whatever is making you want to cut yourself, they just want you to stop cutting b/c it makes them uncomfortable. but you're friends do care about you i'm sure. just be careful and you know how to take care of yourself.... your poem describes everything really really well. i especially like the last stanza *




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