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You know it's the truth
I know it is you
They died because of you
You can't admit the truth
Afraid of what it'll do to you

Your last words killed them
You couldn't leave it at that
You destroyed them
And you deserve to die
Because of that

You killed them
You wanted them to die
You're glad you made them
Commit suicide

You can't bare
What's on your hands
The blood they shed
The fear they had
From what you said
They died for nothing
As it stands
Blood on your hands
As it stands
They died for nothing
From what you said

And you die
By suicide
For what you did
The death of them

As it stands
Blood on your hands
You deserve it
For what you did
To them
A life for a life
As it stands [comments] => 4 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 36 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Last Words

Contributed by essentially9 on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:56:08 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Last Words

You know it's the truth
I know it is you
They died because of you
You can't admit the truth
Afraid of what it'll do to you

Your last words killed them
You couldn't leave it at that
You destroyed them
And you deserve to die
Because of that

You killed them
You wanted them to die
You're glad you made them
Commit suicide

You can't bare
What's on your hands
The blood they shed
The fear they had
From what you said
They died for nothing
As it stands
Blood on your hands
As it stands
They died for nothing
From what you said

And you die
By suicide
For what you did
The death of them

As it stands
Blood on your hands
You deserve it
For what you did
To them
A life for a life
As it stands

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2004-07-07 15:56:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Last Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 04:09:05 PM AEST
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Whoa, the poem of retribution is very ominous and dreary yet in some respect true.

Re: Last Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 04:39:10 PM AEST
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Wow!! Deep....
Jenni

Re: Last Words (User Rating: 1 )
by WestCPunk on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 05:01:27 PM AEST
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Trippin lol nice job
Shelbi

Re: Last Words (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 05:25:35 PM AEST
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wow... great poem... almost... errie...

Jaime

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