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Array ( [sid] => 55251 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Enough is Enough [time] => 2004-07-07 23:30:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => How is it you looked at me like I was one of your friends?
Did you feel anything when you turned around and left me with a bleeding heart in my hand?
How could you do this to me? I trusted you with my everything.
You were the one I thought I'd never say this to...I'm shutting the door, I'm through with you

Never gonna let you come back close to me. Won't let you see my heart again.
I gave you my life, my love and my time
Just before I realized our friendship was a lie
You said you'd be there for me but now you're not and I don't care.
I've come to the place of mind where you mean nothing to me at all.

I still remember us laughing in the rain. Sharing all our secrets and forgetting all our pain.
But that is now just a faded memory. I'm fed up with the lies.
I thought I was your friend and you said you cared for me.
But now I see what I was to you - secret friends don't jive with me

There's something deep inside me now that can't understand how I trusted you.
I look back at you now and it's plain to see what you do.
I don't comprehend how I believed you but as I said before, it's my call now and I'm trough it's over between me and you [comments] => 4 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 65 [informant] => drummerchic18 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )
Enough is Enough

Contributed by drummerchic18 on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 11:30:03 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



How is it you looked at me like I was one of your friends?
Did you feel anything when you turned around and left me with a bleeding heart in my hand?
How could you do this to me? I trusted you with my everything.
You were the one I thought I'd never say this to...I'm shutting the door, I'm through with you

Never gonna let you come back close to me. Won't let you see my heart again.
I gave you my life, my love and my time
Just before I realized our friendship was a lie
You said you'd be there for me but now you're not and I don't care.
I've come to the place of mind where you mean nothing to me at all.

I still remember us laughing in the rain. Sharing all our secrets and forgetting all our pain.
But that is now just a faded memory. I'm fed up with the lies.
I thought I was your friend and you said you cared for me.
But now I see what I was to you - secret friends don't jive with me

There's something deep inside me now that can't understand how I trusted you.
I look back at you now and it's plain to see what you do.
I don't comprehend how I believed you but as I said before, it's my call now and I'm trough it's over between me and you




Copyright © drummerchic18 ... [ 2004-07-07 23:30:03]
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Re: Enough is Enough (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 04:38:59 AM AEST
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I hear ya.
U go girl!
well done.
huggs, luv,
emy


Re: Enough is Enough (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 06:16:01 AM AEST
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Very emotional..
good write..


Re: Enough is Enough (User Rating: 1 )
by Stoney1 on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:31:17 AM AEST
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This reads more like a prose poem.

Everything in your poem belies what it says.*g*; if one can
read between the lines.

The fact that you wrote the poem on this topic also suggests
that you still care very much; and that's why you are so hurt
from being let down by your friend.

As an aid to expunging your hurt through writing, this was a
good exercise.

Stoney


Re: Enough is Enough (User Rating: 1 )
by willow_tara72002 on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 03:38:21 AM AEST
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I know exactly what you mean. I have a friend that lies to me,. used to hate me. and we told eachother secrects and she used what she knew about me against me in way she knew she would hurt me. I should have said our friendship is over months ago. but i felt bad for her, and still do.. Now im trying to get her out of my life,...its hard




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