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Array ( [sid] => 5526 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Thoughts Of You [time] => 2002-10-24 08:30:00 [hometext] => Loving in doubt, afraid to share the feelings that exist. [bodytext] => Velvet locks of beauty and eyes of deepest brown,
I live for every smile you share and die at just one frown.
You’ve become my gravity, a pull I can’t resist,
But how am I to plot my course, your feelings are like mist.
Now cupid’s fallen to the side, his bow has lost it’s mark,
For as long as I say naught, you’re a target in the dark.
But deep inside a fear remains, my voice is held in chains,
A touch from you could be the key, a word could ease my pains.

I long to hold you in my arms and tell you how I feel,
Then whisper softly in your ear, my soul I would reveal.
And with my lips I’d touch your neck, soft passion in each kiss,
You’re a gentle soul of beauty that promises sweet bliss.
But doubt remains, an evil foe, destroyer of us all,
He holds me on the precipice just daring me to fall.
The king of fools is at his side, he’s laughing in my face,
So I lose myself in thoughts of you and dream of your embrace.

By: Doug Morton
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Thoughts Of You

Contributed by wordpoet on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 08:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove



Velvet locks of beauty and eyes of deepest brown,
I live for every smile you share and die at just one frown.
You’ve become my gravity, a pull I can’t resist,
But how am I to plot my course, your feelings are like mist.
Now cupid’s fallen to the side, his bow has lost it’s mark,
For as long as I say naught, you’re a target in the dark.
But deep inside a fear remains, my voice is held in chains,
A touch from you could be the key, a word could ease my pains.

I long to hold you in my arms and tell you how I feel,
Then whisper softly in your ear, my soul I would reveal.
And with my lips I’d touch your neck, soft passion in each kiss,
You’re a gentle soul of beauty that promises sweet bliss.
But doubt remains, an evil foe, destroyer of us all,
He holds me on the precipice just daring me to fall.
The king of fools is at his side, he’s laughing in my face,
So I lose myself in thoughts of you and dream of your embrace.

By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com




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Re: Thoughts Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 08:38:25 AM AEST
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Words can't express the beauty of these poems you've been writing for your secret love - they are just gorgeous. This one is a little darker though - the images are sublime.


Re: Thoughts Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 09:15:56 AM AEST
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nice write, give these to her oneday, life is to short to not let another know how you truely feel,


Re: Thoughts Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 01:48:58 PM AEST
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Wow.. you are definitely on a roll this week... these are all great (all your Secret Love's). I hope that whoever inspires you, will read all of these one day... (even if she just accidentally figures it out by reading them on this site). I wish you the best of luck...

Gin


Re: Thoughts Of You (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 10:50:00 PM AEST
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GOOD READ DON'T HOLD BACK YOU R FEELINGS THE WILL JUST CRUSH YOU DEEPER IN THE GROUND.


Re: Thoughts Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 03:24:05 AM AEST
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I don't know about anyone else but...my heart just melted.


Re: Thoughts Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Rachel on Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 08:17:39 AM AEST
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WOW. I so wish someone would write something like that for me. It's so sweet.




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