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Last time I was sixty I sat in
the park, the sun warmed my
face and tried to read without
my glasses. Went to a small
bar around the corner wanted
to tell someone that it was my
birthday, but since it was in
the beginning of the week only
the barmaid was there, she had
just had a tit lift and they looked
twenty-five years younger than
her. Plied her with drinks, she
closed the bar and in her flat we
groped each other like drowning
people fighting over the same
life belt in a sea of past regrets.
This year’s sixtieth birthday my
girlfriend is cooking me a dinner
grilled, skinless chicken breast
and one glass of red wine, slaps
my hand she does when I try to
refill my glass. It isn’t getting
any easier
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happy birthday oskar

Contributed by Jan_Oskar_Hansen on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 08:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Happy Birthday Oskar

Last time I was sixty I sat in
the park, the sun warmed my
face and tried to read without
my glasses. Went to a small
bar around the corner wanted
to tell someone that it was my
birthday, but since it was in
the beginning of the week only
the barmaid was there, she had
just had a tit lift and they looked
twenty-five years younger than
her. Plied her with drinks, she
closed the bar and in her flat we
groped each other like drowning
people fighting over the same
life belt in a sea of past regrets.
This year’s sixtieth birthday my
girlfriend is cooking me a dinner
grilled, skinless chicken breast
and one glass of red wine, slaps
my hand she does when I try to
refill my glass. It isn’t getting
any easier

Copyright Â© Jan_Oskar_Hansen ... [ 2002-10-24 08:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: happy birthday oskar (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 01:27:53 PM AEST
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Happy 60th Birthday, Jan Oskar....I wish you 60 more healthy and happy years.....
((((hugs))))
Jenni

Re: happy birthday oskar (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 09:33:15 AM AEST
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My word Oskar,
is this what I have to look forward to;-)
Thankyou for posting this view of what appears to be my own future!
Nice writing. I like this very much.

With love
Dean:-)

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