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Array ( [sid] => 55293 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => (whisper) ...worms will grow... [time] => 2004-07-08 12:00:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] => When, whilst pondering,
eyebrows furrow,
(worms will grow)
and brain will curl...

One day, till
one day, sat slumped,
sitting, drool dripping
a long
long
long
way down
from your cavernous cavity...

(the worms will grow)
oh in your brain, of mush they crawl...
(they ooze and they slide)
to watch your eyes sink and fall
red and slip into your skull...

Oh, she's on you now, she moves
and slides,
hear groan, gasp, wet
and quiver...

Her fingernails in your back
have impaled you, dad.
They protrude from your chest
and you gurgle
and you wriggle.

slip & slide
slip & slide

(the worms will grow
and the worms will travel)

Dad.

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 13 [informant] => SensitiveSoAbused [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

(whisper) ...worms will grow...

Contributed by SensitiveSoAbused on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:00:31 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

When, whilst pondering,
eyebrows furrow,
(worms will grow)
and brain will curl...

One day, till
one day, sat slumped,
sitting, drool dripping
a long
long
long
way down
from your cavernous cavity...

(the worms will grow)
oh in your brain, of mush they crawl...
(they ooze and they slide)
to watch your eyes sink and fall
red and slip into your skull...

Oh, she's on you now, she moves
and slides,
hear groan, gasp, wet
and quiver...

Her fingernails in your back
have impaled you, dad.
They protrude from your chest
and you gurgle
and you wriggle.

slip & slide
slip & slide

(the worms will grow
and the worms will travel)

Dad.

Copyright © SensitiveSoAbused ... [ 2004-07-08 12:00:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: (whisper) ...worms will grow... (User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:12:11 PM AEST
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Wow... Wow...
Nice one man. This is sick.
I think I'll have to write another dark one soon.
This was really cool though.

Re: (whisper) ...worms will grow... (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:11:44 PM AEST
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I'll be honest, i dont think this is one of your best
It was ok, the end was the best part
your stuff usually has a bigger impact on me
thats all i think
anyways laters

BS x

Re: (whisper) ...worms will grow... (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:29:12 PM AEST
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wow Lane this gets an A+ for oddness my friend. I don't quite get how u write like this you seem to have a writing style that no one else can match and while this probably accounts for the lack of comments it is still enjoyable to read something that is different so keep at it my little friend. *pats his head* by the way this was a good poem.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: (whisper) ...worms will grow... (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 07:00:57 PM AEST
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this is really good.
and really truthful.
nice job.

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