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Array ( [sid] => 55324 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Suffered the butterfly [time] => 2004-07-08 15:03:45 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A flower grew and butterfly sat on
And spread her wings around
When flower started to go after
those butterfly´s wings to scribble

Butterfly wished to stand the pain
She hoped it would be flower´s arrogance
But with the poison stuck butterfly´s legs
And her tongue was also ate

Very weak already, hard was to move
From the sun sucking power and valour
She defied and tried to get free
Wanted to learn from the trick flowery

Wings changed in so soft web
She only plod leg by leg
Eyes cried out into emptiness
In desert can not find flowers

She would scream, yet has no voice
Heart barely beats, and dark universe
Lightened the lamps on heaven´s path
Butterfly, without nectar, soon you die

Mouth for the last gasped out
And in desert ghost soared
How happily she sat on flower
Why she had, why had to suffer?

Vyrostla květina a na ní motýlek
Rozprostřel pár svých křidýlek
Květina náhle začla se sápat
Křidýlka malému motýlku drápat

Motýlek tu bolest snášel tiše
Neb doufal že patří ke květině pýše
Leč i nožky mu slepila svým jedem
I jeho jazýček zůstal mu polepen

Již slabý, sotva se hýbaje
Ze slunka odvahu a sílu saje
Vzpouzí se a snaží oprostit
Ze lsti té květiny sám sebe poučit

Z křidélek jenom pavučinky tenké
Nožky sotva se vlečou v trávě vysoké
Oči do prázdna vyplakané
V poušti sotva květinu najde

Volal by, leč nemá ani hlas
Srdíčko sotva tepe, obloha temná zas
Rozsvěcí lampičky cesty do ráje
Motýlku, zemřeš, květiny nemaje

Ústa dnes naposled vydechla vzduch
Z motýlka v poušti vznesl se duch
Jak radostně nedávno dosedl na květ,
Proč jen ten maličký, proč musel trpět?

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Suffered the butterfly

Contributed by Aika on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 03:03:45 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

A flower grew and butterfly sat on
And spread her wings around
When flower started to go after
those butterfly´s wings to scribble

Butterfly wished to stand the pain
She hoped it would be flower´s arrogance
But with the poison stuck butterfly´s legs
And her tongue was also ate

Very weak already, hard was to move
From the sun sucking power and valour
She defied and tried to get free
Wanted to learn from the trick flowery

Wings changed in so soft web
She only plod leg by leg
Eyes cried out into emptiness
In desert can not find flowers

She would scream, yet has no voice
Heart barely beats, and dark universe
Lightened the lamps on heaven´s path
Butterfly, without nectar, soon you die

Mouth for the last gasped out
And in desert ghost soared
How happily she sat on flower
Why she had, why had to suffer?

Vyrostla květina a na ní motýlek
Rozprostřel pár svých křidýlek
Květina náhle začla se sápat
Křidýlka malému motýlku drápat

Motýlek tu bolest snášel tiše
Neb doufal že patří ke květině pýše
Leč i nožky mu slepila svým jedem
I jeho jazýček zůstal mu polepen

Již slabý, sotva se hýbaje
Ze slunka odvahu a sílu saje
Vzpouzí se a snaží oprostit
Ze lsti té květiny sám sebe poučit

Z křidélek jenom pavučinky tenké
Nožky sotva se vlečou v trávě vysoké
Oči do prázdna vyplakané
V poušti sotva květinu najde

Volal by, leč nemá ani hlas
Srdíčko sotva tepe, obloha temná zas
Rozsvěcí lampičky cesty do ráje
Motýlku, zemřeš, květiny nemaje

Ústa dnes naposled vydechla vzduch
Z motýlka v poušti vznesl se duch
Jak radostně nedávno dosedl na květ,
Proč jen ten maličký, proč musel trpět?

Copyright Â© Aika ... [ 2004-07-08 15:03:45]
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Re: Suffered the butterfly (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 03:20:26 PM AEST
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A surprisingly good read.

Re: Suffered the butterfly (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 04:01:09 PM AEST
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i really enjoy'd reading this... keep up the good work..

luck to you
~neglected1~

Re: Suffered the butterfly (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 11:50:06 PM AEST
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Oh Aika, the poor little thing,
How very sad for the pretty little butterfly
I'm so glad everything came out all right in the end.
I liked the ending, Why did she have to suffer?
Well written and so sad and then glad.
Love you
consue

Re: Suffered the butterfly (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 03:29:09 PM AEST
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SO SAD BUT WAS WRITTEN WITH HEART & BEAUTY! SORRY TO HEAR OF YOUR MOTHERS SICKNESS!! PLEASE STAY STRONG WITH HER TOGETHER!!! WE HAVE LOVE OF GREAT LENGTHS FOR BOTH OF YOU MY FRIEND,& A TOUCH OF STRENGTHS AS TO NO ENDS!!!!

LOL~DAN!!!!!

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