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Array ( [sid] => 55364 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Give Me One More Bruise [time] => 2004-07-08 19:46:20 [hometext] => Oh how I love it, when you abuse me so. [bodytext] => The yelling,
turns to screaming,
and the shrieks turn to fists.
The bruises,
turn to cuts,
ading gashes to my wrists.

The tears,
turn to ice,
and the pain turns me numb.
The breaking,
turns to broken,
I hate what I've become.

But of course I secretly,
love the way you torture me.
The way you say that I am weak,
the way you love it when I shriek.
I love it when I hide my scars,
a long-kept secret, that is ours.
No matter how I play, I lose.
Please give me one more bruise. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 56 [informant] => 2ndChance [notes] => (Edited by Mod_11) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => sarcasticpoetry )

Give Me One More Bruise

Contributed by 2ndChance on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 07:46:20 PM in AEST
Topic: sarcasticpoetry

The yelling,
turns to screaming,
and the shrieks turn to fists.
The bruises,
turn to cuts,
ading gashes to my wrists.

The tears,
turn to ice,
and the pain turns me numb.
The breaking,
turns to broken,
I hate what I've become.

But of course I secretly,
love the way you torture me.
The way you say that I am weak,
the way you love it when I shriek.
I love it when I hide my scars,
a long-kept secret, that is ours.
No matter how I play, I lose.
Please give me one more bruise.

Copyright © 2ndChance ... [ 2004-07-08 19:46:20]
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Re: Give Me One More Bruise (User Rating: 1 )
by HellsLibrarian on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 07:54:04 PM AEST
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now, that is a complicated relationship. Well written.

Re: Give Me One More Bruise (User Rating: 1 )
by LoVeLy_4_StEvE on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:03:36 PM AEST
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Seems complicated.. But I enjoyed..

Xxlove *N* stuffxX
Lovely

Re: Give Me One More Bruise (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:06:42 PM AEST
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Good piece of work. Too bad it really does happen. If it happened to me I would wait till he went to sleep and tie him up very gently to the bed and beat the hell out of him with a bullwhip. Works everytime. They never try it again.

Rita

Re: Give Me One More Bruise (User Rating: 1 )
by freespirit on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:26:59 PM AEST
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there is so much truth in what you have written and as we all know there is a lot of sick people out there
I like you comments Rita lol
hugs God bless
*Freespirit*

Re: Give Me One More Bruise (User Rating: 1 )
by slayer_015 on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 04:39:42 AM AEST
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Amazing write,I pray it doesn't come from a true experience.Thanks for writing this.

Brian

Re: Give Me One More Bruise (User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 12:43:46 AM AEST
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Wow. thats all....wow...this is one I htink is true...and pray is not. Really good. *claps and cries at greatness*

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