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Smile of Suicide
Contributed by
essentially9
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Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 10:52:29 PM in AEST
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Smile of Suicide
Nothing can bring you back
To your past self
You lost it moving forward
This loneliness envelopes you
As you feel alone in the world
Nothing can bring you back
It's the feelings felt
That are your enemies still
I can see through you
You hate life
And want to die
This loneliness envelopes you
As you feel alone in the world
Wishing you could go back
And be loved
But that day is gone
You smile
To hide
The inside
You die
Again inside
The smile
Of suicide
Nothing can bring back
What you always wanted
The person loved
You die again inside
As the day goes on
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2004-07-08 22:52:29]
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Re: Smile of Suicide
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by darkfairy1188 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 11:01:40 PM AEST
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this would kae a cool song. i like it, it describes pretty well how i feel, too.
~Sara |
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Re: Smile of Suicide
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by waos on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 11:07:13 PM AEST
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My favorite part were the first 3 lines. cause right now I am trying to find out who I am without suicide... after attempting it. And who I am without cutting. Your poem is so true because it rings such a cord within my soul... I have also found that things don't have to stay that way.
Good job writing it and thank you for posting it because it made me think and I could feel it inside. I love reading things I can feel. |
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Re: Smile of Suicide
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by shrunkin_fool34142316 on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 12:32:27 AM AEST
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| Gah... u really captured my emotions from the past few yrs..... until like 3 months ago... i can help u if u want i have beem through it all let me know k |
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Re: Smile of Suicide
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by Dupa on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 08:04:47 AM AEST
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| This brought back memories of a few years ago as a teen. Somtimes the fight is so difficult and the best thing to do is to let it out like this. |
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Re: Smile of Suicide
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:09:15 PM AEST
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powerful and soo beautifully written, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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