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Array ( [sid] => 55441 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thoughts of you [time] => 2004-07-09 03:54:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => As I looked at you the other day,
I saw how much in every way,
That I love you.
You know the things you say,
And the way you act every day,
Are amazing.

When you laugh and when you cry,
All I want is you and I,
To be together.
But now I know that there’s no way,
My feelings for you I just can’t say,
No not now.

The sight of you so wonderful,
As I stare my heart falls down,
And it lands just where it should.
Now I’m acting like a fool,
Cos the thought of you so beautiful.

All day long I think about you,
And all night long I dream about you,
And ever since I fell for you,
I felt my life become so true.
And I would walk 500 miles,
And I would walk 500 more,
So that I could catch your tears.

My thoughts are now all of you,
Perfect in everyway,
Flawless by nature,
Though tainted in pain [comments] => 7 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Dizza_13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Thoughts of you

Contributed by Dizza_13 on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 03:54:53 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

As I looked at you the other day,
I saw how much in every way,
That I love you.
You know the things you say,
And the way you act every day,
Are amazing.

When you laugh and when you cry,
All I want is you and I,
To be together.
But now I know that there’s no way,
My feelings for you I just can’t say,
No not now.

The sight of you so wonderful,
As I stare my heart falls down,
And it lands just where it should.
Now I’m acting like a fool,
Cos the thought of you so beautiful.

All day long I think about you,
And all night long I dream about you,
And ever since I fell for you,
I felt my life become so true.
And I would walk 500 miles,
And I would walk 500 more,
So that I could catch your tears.

My thoughts are now all of you,
Perfect in everyway,
Flawless by nature,
Though tainted in pain

Copyright Â© Dizza_13 ... [ 2004-07-09 03:54:53]
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Re: Thoughts of you (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 04:18:44 AM AEST
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Heavenly beautifull masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Thoughts of you (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 04:30:01 AM AEST
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I hope your companion is thrilled to read your poetry. I am grateful that you share it with us.

Re: Thoughts of you (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 05:09:55 AM AEST
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This tells us you are a beautiful spirit..its a nice poem. venkat

Re: Thoughts of you (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 09:20:58 AM AEST
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really good poem. Nicely stated.

Kimberly

Re: Thoughts of you (User Rating: 1 )
by OMEGA_ on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 10:42:42 AM AEST
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that was great written, really i like it
keep going

Re: Thoughts of you (User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:34:41 AM AEST
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Brings a tear to my eye dylan, i only wish that someone would feel this way about me.
Loz
xoxoxo

Re: Thoughts of you (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 05:50:52 AM AEST
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Awh this poem is very touching, it made me sad inside. It really defines your true loving devotion to the one who captured your heart.
Another good read.
Corinna

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