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The time has come for me to lose my cool.
This beast inside will not hide
The day is coming.
For you my bride.

Thought you were the queen now ya' got nothing
My will you didn't abide
The day is coming
The day you died.

I've got all of these voices in my head
They keep whispering the words you said
I put up with all your junk
You treated me like a teenage punk
THE DAY IS COMING

Yeah I'm coming out to your place
Can you feel me coming to kiss your face?
Oh have you met, the beast in me
I never introduced you?
so sorry

Said we would be married but my love was too scary
I looked like a fool
The day is coming
My revenge on you

These voices just keep screaming your name.
Loverboy is going insane
God is love but love's denied
Ya' hear me coming
You better hide
THE DAY IS COMING...
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The day is coming

Contributed by norticus on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Yeah it's coming. You can see it too.
The time has come for me to lose my cool.
This beast inside will not hide
The day is coming.
For you my bride.

Thought you were the queen now ya' got nothing
My will you didn't abide
The day is coming
The day you died.

I've got all of these voices in my head
They keep whispering the words you said
I put up with all your junk
You treated me like a teenage punk
THE DAY IS COMING

Yeah I'm coming out to your place
Can you feel me coming to kiss your face?
Oh have you met, the beast in me
I never introduced you?
so sorry

Said we would be married but my love was too scary
I looked like a fool
The day is coming
My revenge on you

These voices just keep screaming your name.
Loverboy is going insane
God is love but love's denied
Ya' hear me coming
You better hide
THE DAY IS COMING...
jz

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Re: The day is coming (User Rating: 1 )
by peace123 on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 08:04:54 PM AEST
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powerful and intense

Re: The day is coming (User Rating: 1 )
by viola on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 08:35:16 PM AEST
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i think if she read this she'd pack her pants then run and hide. spooky.

Re: The day is coming (User Rating: 1 )
by Kiz on Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 08:59:20 PM AEST
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***** me babe, nice one..
LOVED this one. Passion, tension, hate, love, anger, pain, reality...all in one. This is what i like about u babe, keep rolling out the great ones! kiz's scale: 4.891

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