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Array ( [sid] => 55648 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Alone not wanted. [time] => 2004-07-10 21:19:14 [hometext] => The one person who can make me think less of myself. The one who can depress me to the point.... One person always reminds though. That others love me. [bodytext] => One night not to ask
Although the time has past
A night we were to share
But you not to bare
I sat there waiting
My sister gone to have some fun
As you sit and drink
And make me think
This one night I thought for us
We to have as all of us
To live a life we once had
To much to be loved I guess
As I watched you embarass yourself
Reapeat the words im almost done
I wont spend my night watching
You waste your life with no ones around
I pulled out the knife
It looked sweet just one slice
A feeling of unwanted
Oh ive never wanted
But its always haunted
I cant rid of it
At least the one who helps me came in
Before I commited an awful sin
For her alone reminds me
That there are few that love me [comments] => 4 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 13 [informant] => heartfilledblood [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Alone not wanted.

Contributed by heartfilledblood on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 09:19:14 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

One night not to ask
Although the time has past
A night we were to share
But you not to bare
I sat there waiting
My sister gone to have some fun
As you sit and drink
And make me think
This one night I thought for us
We to have as all of us
To live a life we once had
To much to be loved I guess
As I watched you embarass yourself
Reapeat the words im almost done
I wont spend my night watching
You waste your life with no ones around
I pulled out the knife
It looked sweet just one slice
A feeling of unwanted
Oh ive never wanted
But its always haunted
I cant rid of it
At least the one who helps me came in
Before I commited an awful sin
For her alone reminds me
That there are few that love me

Copyright © heartfilledblood ... [ 2004-07-10 21:19:14]
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Re: Alone not wanted. (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 05:42:14 AM AEST
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very sad write, i am sorry for your pain...... you are loved,

takecare
pixie xx

Re: Alone not wanted. (User Rating: 1 )
by InnerBeautyQueen on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 01:03:35 AM AEST
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ssssooooo sad. im glad there's someone there to remind you.

Re: Alone not wanted. (User Rating: 1 )
by shorty_52 on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 08:09:32 PM AEST
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hey babe. i'm glad that i came into ur life to make u not do that. u r loved and she loves u to. always remember that. she may not show it at times but she duz luv u. think on that and don't bring it up to me. i know what u would say. well talk to u later. luv u bunchez.
~allyson~

Re: Alone not wanted. (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 07:26:49 PM AEST
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yes there is always the one person that actually cares or loves you! like you said to me before...if you ever need to talk hit me up...pyrofungus@hotmail.com

please comment on my work too
summer

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