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Array ( [sid] => 55689 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Gone but not forgotten [time] => 2004-07-11 04:15:01 [hometext] => loosing my grandma was one of the hardest parts in my life so i wrote a poem to share with my family and now showing all of you [bodytext] => its been almost a year now
but I still feel the pain
of when my grandma left me
a loss and not a gain
she got into an accident
we thought shed be okay
no one knew it was coming
her last and final day
I remember her smile
she was healthy as can be
I thought she would bounce right back
but I was blinded and couldn’t see
I remember when they told me
right before I went to school
I thought that I could handle it
walk around and play it cool
I went to the funeral
sat down and began to cry
I didn’t get why she had to go
now a part of me had died
I talk to her at night
and tell her how much I care
even though I cant see her
I know she is still there [comments] => 4 [counter] => 226 [topic] => 39 [informant] => mlcarter369 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Gone but not forgotten

Contributed by mlcarter369 on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 04:15:01 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

its been almost a year now
but I still feel the pain
of when my grandma left me
a loss and not a gain
she got into an accident
we thought shed be okay
no one knew it was coming
her last and final day
I remember her smile
she was healthy as can be
I thought she would bounce right back
but I was blinded and couldn’t see
I remember when they told me
right before I went to school
I thought that I could handle it
walk around and play it cool
I went to the funeral
sat down and began to cry
I didn’t get why she had to go
now a part of me had died
I talk to her at night
and tell her how much I care
even though I cant see her
I know she is still there

Copyright Â© mlcarter369 ... [ 2004-07-11 04:15:01]
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Re: Gone but not forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by 61grahamj on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 04:24:22 AM AEST
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what a wonderful tribute to your grandmother your love for her comes shining through .. it is always hard to lose someone you love dearly and she would be proud of you and you loving words. god bless
61grahamj

Re: Gone but not forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 04:42:59 AM AEST
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That is how I feel about my dad, it's been 19 years since he's passed away. This is beautifully written. Thanks

Re: Gone but not forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 05:30:16 AM AEST
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Awwww this was so lovely, yes she is still there, as is my grandma and grandad :) *hugs you*

she knows how much you care..... lovely write, very sad tho...

takecare
pixie xx

Re: Gone but not forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by hopelessromantic on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 11:31:14 AM AEST
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This poem is really really good. I also thought that my grandpa would survive but didn't. My poem is the same title as yours and it is about my grandpa.

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