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Array ( [sid] => 55772 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => succumb to the mold [time] => 2004-07-11 22:33:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => breaking and folding
succumb to their molding
at least they’ll leave
your golden case

a shell to hide
true thoughts inside
unlike me
don’t go to waste

keep your tears
to cry at night
never give up
but keep your voice low

remember lost kindness
forbidden disgrace
the haunting truth
they’ll never know

remember forgiveness
so you won’t become
the one’s that haunt
your deepest fears

and in the end
I promise you this
you can break free
their hold

they won’t guess
that perfection they pressed
it never took hold
you survived the mold [comments] => 2 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 13 [informant] => InnerBeautyQueen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
succumb to the mold

Contributed by InnerBeautyQueen on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 10:33:08 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



breaking and folding
succumb to their molding
at least they’ll leave
your golden case

a shell to hide
true thoughts inside
unlike me
don’t go to waste

keep your tears
to cry at night
never give up
but keep your voice low

remember lost kindness
forbidden disgrace
the haunting truth
they’ll never know

remember forgiveness
so you won’t become
the one’s that haunt
your deepest fears

and in the end
I promise you this
you can break free
their hold

they won’t guess
that perfection they pressed
it never took hold
you survived the mold




Copyright © InnerBeautyQueen ... [ 2004-07-11 22:33:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: succumb to the mold (User Rating: 1 )
by paula_kay23 on Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 02:54:35 PM AEST
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i used to bottle things up, i could be dead cert you read my mind when writing this lol.
good poem


Re: succumb to the mold (User Rating: 1 )
by tawakwan on Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 08:13:55 PM AEST
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Thank you.




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