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Array ( [sid] => 5586 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love part one [time] => 2002-10-25 10:30:00 [hometext] => part 2 and part 3 coming soon [bodytext] => Love part one

all this night i look to the skies
and think about all your selfish lies
you took me from heaven to hell
a pain in my side like i fell
madly in love with this shell
gun in hand im ready to reveal
you wont ruin my life for nothing
its not just my heart that you fling
my whole life is a messed up dream now
and i wonder, all i ask is how
how could you do this to me
wasnt it you and me forever we will always be
well its too late now, im gonna end us
and in noone i will ever put my trust
i know in doing this i will miss you so much
your sweet smell, glittering eyes, and caressing touch
but im still willing for this sacrifice
a place in heaven i hope you fit nice
cause i aint goin there, too much sin
ill be luck if i ever see your face again

so peace to my crew and all who were there when i was feelin blue, i hope we all cool but i wont be some 's fool
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 2 [informant] => crucifixioncross [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Love part one

Contributed by crucifixioncross on Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Love part one

all this night i look to the skies
and think about all your selfish lies
you took me from heaven to hell
a pain in my side like i fell
madly in love with this shell
gun in hand im ready to reveal
you wont ruin my life for nothing
its not just my heart that you fling
my whole life is a messed up dream now
and i wonder, all i ask is how
how could you do this to me
wasnt it you and me forever we will always be
well its too late now, im gonna end us
and in noone i will ever put my trust
i know in doing this i will miss you so much
your sweet smell, glittering eyes, and caressing touch
but im still willing for this sacrifice
a place in heaven i hope you fit nice
cause i aint goin there, too much sin
ill be luck if i ever see your face again

so peace to my crew and all who were there when i was feelin blue, i hope we all cool but i wont be some 's fool

Copyright Â© crucifixioncross ... [ 2002-10-25 10:30:00]
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Re: Love part one (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 07:09:28 AM AEST
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You don't need to end it all. Don't think its over, because its not. Just get through this, so that when that person is down over the one they love, you can laugh at them and see how much they suffer when they have nothing to cling to.

Re: Love part one (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 11:32:13 PM AEST
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THIS WAS VERY HEARTFELT,GOOD WRITE,CHRISTINA

Re: Love part one (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 02:46:22 PM AEST
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Very heartfelt and very deep
sad write, Thanks for sharing it
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Love part one (User Rating: 1 )
by lost_word on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 03:21:45 PM AEST
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good write, i like how u held in most of the anger in the beginning to get the point across then blew up in the end..

lost_word

Re: Love part one (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 11:10:53 AM AEST
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Love is wonderful or tragic....it either lifts you to heights unknown..or drops you into the deepest pit of despair and anger. Dont give them the pleasure of knowing they have such power over you...just walk away. Great write btw :o)

Re: Love part one (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 12:49:14 AM AEST
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so much anger so much pain. I know where your coming from!
Amy

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