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Array ( [sid] => 55905 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Crushed Pills and Bathroom Cleaner [time] => 2004-07-12 21:56:39 [hometext] => I'm not going to do anything. I'm not even close. I get bored and for some reason I think up scenarios. This one's been begging to come out. [bodytext] => Crush up all the Tylenol
find the ibuprofen.
Take all mommy's
bright orange bottles
and make the pills a powder.
Then take the bathroom cleaner,
take the paint thinner
from the shelf.
Find where mommy keeps
the antifreeze
and mix it in a bowl.
Then take the remnants of the pills
and put them in the liquid.
Stir and watch the pretty
death recipe go round.
Pour it in a cup,
take a great big sip.
Finish all the mixture,
and then think,
this is it!
Feel the potion
crash throughout your body.
It takes away your life,
springing from your toes.
Your stomach now
begins to quake.
It's doing what you wanted.
Your feel really ill.
The pain is most unbearable,
but you know the end is coming.
Death is coming to sweep you away,
and cleanse you of ALL your pain. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 36 [informant] => WorthlesSanity666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Crushed Pills and Bathroom Cleaner

Contributed by WorthlesSanity666 on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:56:39 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Crush up all the Tylenol
find the ibuprofen.
Take all mommy's
bright orange bottles
and make the pills a powder.
Then take the bathroom cleaner,
take the paint thinner
from the shelf.
Find where mommy keeps
the antifreeze
and mix it in a bowl.
Then take the remnants of the pills
and put them in the liquid.
Stir and watch the pretty
death recipe go round.
Pour it in a cup,
take a great big sip.
Finish all the mixture,
and then think,
this is it!
Feel the potion
crash throughout your body.
It takes away your life,
springing from your toes.
Your stomach now
begins to quake.
It's doing what you wanted.
Your feel really ill.
The pain is most unbearable,
but you know the end is coming.
Death is coming to sweep you away,
and cleanse you of ALL your pain.

Copyright © WorthlesSanity666 ... [ 2004-07-12 21:56:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Crushed Pills and Bathroom Cleaner (User Rating: 1 )
by Ceres on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 10:16:13 PM AEST
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Jeez... I don't even want to think of how that tastes! But anyway... the poem was really good. It really painted a picture. Kind of a nasty picture but... It was good!
- Ceres

Re: Crushed Pills and Bathroom Cleaner (User Rating: 1 )
by freespirit on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 12:09:53 AM AEST
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I sure hope that you dont plan on trying
to do this being alive is great
freespirit

Re: Crushed Pills and Bathroom Cleaner (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 05:24:31 AM AEST
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good poem.
in one respect i found this a little funny to think of everything placed in this mixture. lucky it' not real.

Re: Crushed Pills and Bathroom Cleaner (User Rating: 1 )
by grip-wth-broken-fingers on Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 11:12:46 AM AEST
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nice poem tht mixture sounds wuite complicated u got a recipe lol nah but seriuos its a good poem in all ur poems u use very strong words and feelings i liek tht u got talent -grip-

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