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Array ( [sid] => 55924 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Let go of me [time] => 2004-07-13 00:14:33 [hometext] => this poem is written in dedication to my live in girlfriend and her ex [bodytext] => i am close
and your ex is near
you called him an *****
but to you he is dear

we get along
you call it disturbing
when he's always around
my anger is curbing

i gave up it all
left where i live
i gave to you
what you had not to give

you hold my life
in your hand
yet your closed up
with another man

i could kill him
release my stress
but all it would do
would make a bigger mess

i live with you
but he is here more than me
your still in love
this is easy to see
but if your gonna play
just let go of me

i wanna fight for you
but you won't let me fight again
you won't let us fight over you
cuz your afraid i'd win

this way we live
is killing me
your in love with him
which is plain to see
if your gonna play
just let go of me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 32 [informant] => crash [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Let go of me

Contributed by crash on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 12:14:33 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

i am close
and your ex is near
you called him an *****
but to you he is dear

we get along
you call it disturbing
when he's always around
my anger is curbing

i gave up it all
left where i live
i gave to you
what you had not to give

you hold my life
in your hand
yet your closed up
with another man

i could kill him
release my stress
but all it would do
would make a bigger mess

i live with you
but he is here more than me
your still in love
this is easy to see
but if your gonna play
just let go of me

i wanna fight for you
but you won't let me fight again
you won't let us fight over you
cuz your afraid i'd win

this way we live
is killing me
your in love with him
which is plain to see
if your gonna play
just let go of me

Copyright © crash ... [ 2004-07-13 00:14:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Let go of me (User Rating: 1 )
by Adriean on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 03:02:41 AM AEST
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Brutally honest poem. Especially when you've been on both sides, which I have. Good write

Re: Let go of me (User Rating: 1 )
by Centerstage92 on Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 12:34:30 PM AEST
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Really deep Crash. Your girlfriend obviously has a few issues to work out. But don't worry, sure ya will work it out one way or another. Good luck and Great poem!

Re: Let go of me (User Rating: 1 )
by SarahB on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 12:16:08 PM AEST
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Rob, hun, i'm sorry i hurt you but I think it's better this way. We probably wouldn't work out anyways

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