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Array ( [sid] => 56065 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Its a world [time] => 2004-07-13 20:25:32 [hometext] => i don't know why i titled it this,i think its because my father always made my life harder than it really is and should be,enjoy comments are greatly appriciated [bodytext] => do you call this life?i don't
i've got nothing,not even
a father that cares,i don't
know why he doesn't i never
did anything wrong

what do you call this?everyone always
disses me and i hate it,i come home 10
minutes late and everyone is up my *ss,
its not like i was out smoken grass all night
why must they always fight?i hate this

(chorus)
its a ***** up world we all live in,its so ****** up
no one knows what to do,now all i got is you,its not much
but its more that others,but its also less then others,
its a ***** up world,i'm just a young girl and its a *****
up world,i hate it so much i've came very close to doing
things happy people wouldn't even think of,its a ***** up
world

all these crimes going around and no one is doing
the time,how many times do i have to think about
all the crazy *****?why is my father so lazy?when he
looks at me it seems as if he doesn't even care about
what all i've accomplished hard in my life,why?

falling down from the cloud,no one is ever coming
around,i'm about to hit the cold ground,where is
everyone,is my life done,it feels incomplete,i wanna
defeat this monster called father,does he hate me?
is it too late to know,should i wait or go?

(repeat x3)
its a ***** up world

hey father you're nothing to me,you don't even
know what i wanna be in life,i'm not even gonna
bother trying to tell ya cuz that'd be a waste of
my precous time,i'm living happy you're
living even more happier cuz you don't have to
put up with your happy family,you don't even look
at me as your daughter,i feel slaughtered when you
look into my eyes,now i realize why,cuz you don't care

(repeat x4)
its a ***** up world

(chorus)
its a ***** up world we all live in,its so ***** up
no one knows what to do,now all i got is you,its not much
but its more that others,but its also less then others,
its a ***** up world,i'm just a young girl and its a *****
up world,i hate it so much i've came very close to doing
things happy people wouldn't even think of,its a ***** up
world

its so so so so so so so ***** right up,its a ***** up world

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 15 [informant] => booboo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FathersDayPoems )
Its a world

Contributed by booboo on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 08:25:32 PM in AEST
Topic: FathersDayPoems



do you call this life?i don't
i've got nothing,not even
a father that cares,i don't
know why he doesn't i never
did anything wrong

what do you call this?everyone always
disses me and i hate it,i come home 10
minutes late and everyone is up my *ss,
its not like i was out smoken grass all night
why must they always fight?i hate this

(chorus)
its a ***** up world we all live in,its so ****** up
no one knows what to do,now all i got is you,its not much
but its more that others,but its also less then others,
its a ***** up world,i'm just a young girl and its a *****
up world,i hate it so much i've came very close to doing
things happy people wouldn't even think of,its a ***** up
world

all these crimes going around and no one is doing
the time,how many times do i have to think about
all the crazy *****?why is my father so lazy?when he
looks at me it seems as if he doesn't even care about
what all i've accomplished hard in my life,why?

falling down from the cloud,no one is ever coming
around,i'm about to hit the cold ground,where is
everyone,is my life done,it feels incomplete,i wanna
defeat this monster called father,does he hate me?
is it too late to know,should i wait or go?

(repeat x3)
its a ***** up world

hey father you're nothing to me,you don't even
know what i wanna be in life,i'm not even gonna
bother trying to tell ya cuz that'd be a waste of
my precous time,i'm living happy you're
living even more happier cuz you don't have to
put up with your happy family,you don't even look
at me as your daughter,i feel slaughtered when you
look into my eyes,now i realize why,cuz you don't care

(repeat x4)
its a ***** up world

(chorus)
its a ***** up world we all live in,its so ***** up
no one knows what to do,now all i got is you,its not much
but its more that others,but its also less then others,
its a ***** up world,i'm just a young girl and its a *****
up world,i hate it so much i've came very close to doing
things happy people wouldn't even think of,its a ***** up
world

its so so so so so so so ***** right up,its a ***** up world





Copyright © booboo ... [ 2004-07-13 20:25:32]
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Re: Its a world (User Rating: 1 )
by cheech on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 08:46:12 PM AEST
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i 2 feel ur pain,its not easy growing up without but with a father,mine was abusive and very mean to us all,i feel you using perfound language was way of escaping....wonder***** write its was absalutely heart triggering



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