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Array ( [sid] => 56079 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wells of Tears [time] => 2004-07-13 21:59:19 [hometext] => I just sat and wrote.....Please read and comment.... [bodytext] => I don’t know how to get the things out I need to say
I need help and I know that
There are people who are reaching out to me
I try to reach back but I fall short
I fall into the pit of failure
Where I all to often find myself
Its not like I don’t try
So don’t say that
I don’t want to fail
I need to succeed
I need to find someone who I can just open up to
When I look deep down, the light is out
I can’t stand myself and I won’t anymore
Too many people just don’t understand
You tell me to talk
But you don’t really want to listen
I just want to be in a world where I can be me
I need to love myself and before anything else
This world has too many rules and too many standards
Where can I go?
Who can help me?
I’m not gonna kill myself
Yes I’m damn close
But that would mean all the b*tch*s in my life would win
They took control of me and waited for this day
I have to be strong but I need a little help
I said this before and it still stands
I need to be me
And that’s all there is
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Wells of Tears

Contributed by jillian_f006 on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 09:59:19 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I don’t know how to get the things out I need to say
I need help and I know that
There are people who are reaching out to me
I try to reach back but I fall short
I fall into the pit of failure
Where I all to often find myself
Its not like I don’t try
So don’t say that
I don’t want to fail
I need to succeed
I need to find someone who I can just open up to
When I look deep down, the light is out
I can’t stand myself and I won’t anymore
Too many people just don’t understand
You tell me to talk
But you don’t really want to listen
I just want to be in a world where I can be me
I need to love myself and before anything else
This world has too many rules and too many standards
Where can I go?
Who can help me?
I’m not gonna kill myself
Yes I’m damn close
But that would mean all the b*tch*s in my life would win
They took control of me and waited for this day
I have to be strong but I need a little help
I said this before and it still stands
I need to be me
And that’s all there is




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Re: Wells of Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by farmtowngirl on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:15:21 AM AEST
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Wow.....wow thats all i can say this has hit me deep. i know how ur feeling except i found my place to be me but unfortently its not school its church. i really hope u can find a place to be yourself!
Liz


Re: Wells of Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:47:24 AM AEST
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This is really sad, but well written.....hope you get the help you need.....
Hugs
Jenni


Re: Wells of Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 07:34:32 AM AEST
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Don't be afraid to reach out again, you will find that someone to ease your burden.
You are right, you need to find a way to love yourself, but sometimes it takes help to reach that point.
Feel free to message me if you wish

steve




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