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Array ( [sid] => 5610 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Believe! [time] => 2002-10-25 15:30:00 [hometext] => After continuously reading, and yes I was guilty of writing, "Oh why won't she love me? She is so blind, She won't see how much I love her, She cannot this and cannot that blah...blah...blah boohoohoo!!! No trust!
Ooops sorry, that's not very compassionate is it! :-)
Try this little growing up excercise! [bodytext] => Believe in her abilities
To love,
To live,
To listen,
To understand,
To have an opinion,
To win an argument,
To be right,
To breathe,
To be herself,
To be on time?
To be caring,
To believe in you.
And she will share all with you
As you will with her your belief.
This is what I believe love to be,
And I believe I'm not alone!
Just Believe! [comments] => 5 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Unaekseveer1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Believe!

Contributed by Unaekseveer1 on Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 03:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Believe in her abilities
To love,
To live,
To listen,
To understand,
To have an opinion,
To win an argument,
To be right,
To breathe,
To be herself,
To be on time?
To be caring,
To believe in you.
And she will share all with you
As you will with her your belief.
This is what I believe love to be,
And I believe I'm not alone!
Just Believe!

Copyright © Unaekseveer1 ... [ 2002-10-25 15:30:00]
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Re: Believe! (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 03:45:26 PM AEST
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That just about sums it up!!! I could get really philisophical right now, but I'm too tired... so I won't!!! ;) I'd probably mess it up. Great write!

Gin...

Re: Believe! (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 12:30:54 PM AEST
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Thanks Gin,
"Great write"?
This was going to be titled "Respect!" But this word is so overused that it has lost most of it's meaning!
When used, blokes only hear the pronunciation (normally, disrespectfully, abusing a West Indies accent) and do not fully understand the meaning behind the word any more, and so it became "Believe!"
I couldn't get it to rhyme! The content I wanted is in there but nomatter what I tried it just wouldn't rhyme!
So then I tried to get the outline of it to be in a recognisable female form, but it refused this also!
So I gave up and just posted it, not very impatient of me!!
Anyway thankyou for your kind words.

With love
Dean;-)

Re: Believe! (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 04:33:39 PM AEST
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Dean, this is a great philosophy to live by. I have no problem believing in others it is my self I haveI have trouble believing in. Great poem.
ShadowsCloud

Re: Believe! (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 11:44:45 AM AEST
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Me too unfortunately Candice,
we really shouldn't doubt ourselves so much!
I just don't know whom I'm supposed to compare myself to, to judge whether I'm a good person or not? I do like to think I am, but it's just believing I have the strength needed to do what others seem to find so easy!
I do often think it's just my own self standards that are too high and I simply expect too much from me in life! But I'm not even sure about that!
Anyway, I'm very pleased you liked this one also Candice.

With love
Dean:-)

Re: Believe! (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 03:42:57 PM AEST
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Dean, You are so right we shouldn't doubt ourselves so much. I can not be sure why you doubt your self, but my self doubt has come directly from my bad experences with men. I used to think that I was a great person. Now because of all I have been through in my life, I just don't know anymore. But I am really trying to work through this. If it helps any, I think that you are a good person.
ShadowsCloud

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